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Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2011 8:00:24 PM Title: Chapter 14

You lucky, lucky girl. Great chapter. I'm so glad Logan accepted. I love the new chapter and hope you update again soon. Hope you have fun in San Francisco. ;D.

Author's Response: Hehe, thank you so much! As if he'd be that stupid LOL, but, I didn't want it to turn sour by having him reject her. This is a celebration. I will try to see what I can get done between packing and more dialysis treatments. I hope I do as well. I'll be writing up reviews for each of the 3 perfomances I'm going to. Ta-ta and thank you for your review!

Reviewer: serafim Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2011 7:52:59 PM Title: Chapter 14

I didn't even see that you had updated the last chapter! Very, very sweet, the comment about Logan feeling a bit humiliated about her asking him and how quickly it seemed that they were talking marriage was realistic. Nice touch between the chapters by throwing Scott into the mix. Very enjoyable! :)

Author's Response: Yeah, call me The Stealth Poster... LOL! Yeah, you guy's will have to stay tooned in to find out just when Logan's gonna out do Marie's proposal. Yeah, I thought I might throw Scott under the bus. Thank you, thank you. Please stay tooned for more updates, don't want ya to get left behind... LOL Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2011 7:25:12 PM Title: Chapter 13

I love the chapter. I'm so glad you updated. However I agree you are an evil evil woman. Leaving us all hanging like that. And poor Marie, leaving her hanging for almost an whole hour. I want to comfort poor Logan one minute, and kick him in the behind the next. Please update soon! Great work, as always.

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. My Good Twin flipped a coin and you will soon see the results! Hehe, just wait for what's comin... Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2011 1:01:46 AM Title: Chapter 12

I bet that was one picture both Marie and Logan won't be forgetting anytime soon. The first trip to Dinsey will be forever burned in their memories by the fun they had on Splash Mountain, and not because of the ride itself. Keep up the great work. Can't wait to find out what happens next. I'm sure Logan will be getting Marie back for her little stunt.

Author's Response: Well... I'll just have to make sure Jubilee doesn't get ahold of those pictures now won't I? Hmmmm... Must be careful with Jubilee Muse and watch her. You never know what she'll cook up. You won't have to wait much longer... New chapters are coming your way! Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2011 12:49:06 AM Title: Chapter 11

Aww poor Logan. I hope he and Marie can get his flashbacks in order for him.

However I really like how he'd enjoying Disney.

Author's Response: Yeah, somehow I was just flabbergasted how it came through that simple things like plastic swords or live steam trains through jungle landscape could trigger stuff. Thank you for your continued interest in the story and keep reading!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2011 12:36:01 AM Title: Chapter 10

Great work. I hope Logan doesn't freak out at all the crowd, but I just know he won't turn Marie down. He'd be the biggest idiot this side of the Masion Line.

Author's Response: Hahaha, I was hoping I just made it a little complicated enough... But Wolvie Does It Best... And Logan is going to out do Marie's proposal... I'm not even sure it's possible, and I'm the author! Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2011 12:18:19 AM Title: Chapter 9

I hope this inspires you to write more, because I'm just loving the story so far. It keeps getting better and better. Keep the laughs and smiles coming.

Author's Response: Yes! It does! I have more about to get posted... Fresh off the presses... Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2011 12:04:24 AM Title: Chapter 8

I love this chapter. Just to much to love to pick out just one thing. I'm looking forward to the the chapter.

I know this is after the fact, but I hope all went well for you with your Dialysis access.

Author's Response: Good, I'm glad. Yeah, it's thumpin' again. I'm getting the stitch out next week. Thanks for thinking of me and reviewing!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2011 11:31:57 PM Title: Chapter 7

My sock are definitely off, I also need a fan to cool off. hehehe. Curious to what will happen next.

Author's Response: Hehehe, well, just to forewarn ya'll I've been puting in Drink Warnings so you don't fry the computer with a drink after reading. Maybe I need a fan warning too? Hehe, thanks for your review!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2011 11:17:47 PM Title: Chapter 6

Marie and Logan getting naughty for Christmas. they must have been very good this year. Love the new chapter.

Author's Response: Yeah, they've been pretty patient with me writing projects long hand until I got the laptop. Thank you for continuing to read! Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2011 11:02:42 PM Title: Chapter 5

I'm having a blast reading this little piece of fun. Great job!

Author's Response: Hehe, glad you like it! I was raised on Disneyana and I know lots of secrets not many people know. I hope you continue to enjoy the story! Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2011 10:50:40 PM Title: Chapter 4

I love Logan in this story. I hope he doesn't freak out at the park. hehehe.

Author's Response: He just might if he knew that his mother had engineered how he and Marie got together in Laughlin City... Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2011 10:38:29 PM Title: Chapter 3

Just love how both Marie and Logan called his cousin for help. Can't wait to see what happens between Maui and Disney. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Yeah, the cousin just kind of popped up. She reminds me of the movie version of Lara Croft, like she could kick butt if she wanted to in her younger days but, she's older now. Angelina Jolie-like but, married, and older without an army of adopted kids. The Maui part is scheduled to happen much later in the honeymoon set of this series. Lots more reading for you and a ton more writing for me. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2011 10:26:36 PM Title: Chapter 2

Great chapter, but I expected nothing less. I'm eager for more. :)

Author's Response: I am so happy you are... Please read on. The bunny waiter will be by with your drink of choice. Thank you for you review!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2011 10:13:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love it. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Yeay, new reviewer that has decided to fall into the rabbit hole! I hope you continue to love it. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Xgirl14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2011 12:00:09 AM Title: Chapter 12

Yay your back! I was starting to worry. I can't wait for Logan's memories/flashbacks to finally come together and he finally knows what they mean!

Author's Response: Yeah, sorry 'bout that, Logan pulled me back under the covers to explain the finer points of why it's not wise to write on the laptop in bed. Yeah, I'm not sure how many to put in but I'm sure it will try to be interesting. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: serafim Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2011 11:03:10 PM Title: Chapter 10

It's interesting seeing how you have Marie and Logan interact with each other, and their affection for each other really comes through. Very sweet! I really like your very romantic take on Logan as well. :)

Author's Response: I wanted to show that even though he may be a bad-ass, he's a totally different guy when it comes to his girl. We get to see the 'good guy' come out. It doesn't make him any less a bad-ass and we get to see more of his humanity. Almost like he's just a guy, but he's got an extraordinary side.

Reviewer: Xgirl14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2011 12:44:20 AM Title: Chapter 10

Yay first review! I love where this story is going and I want to know what logan's cousin has to tell! I also can't wait for the question to be popped! Keep writing and I will keep reading!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I have more written and it's just been sent to my beta. Stay tooned! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Xgirl14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2011 12:34:40 AM Title: Chapter 8

Yay I got mentioned! Yay new chapters! And yay first comment on this chapter! I hope all goes well with your procedure and I can't wait to read more! Logan has no idea :)

Author's Response: Hehehe, I have returned, Wolvie wouldn't let me rest anyway. Yup, and just because he wouldn't let me rest last night, I put in a little plot twist, and worked on Logan's family tree. There is such a huge twist coming... I'm not sure Logan will believe it. I know ya'll will. I have sent chapters 9 and 10 off to my beta and I started work on 11 and 12 this morning. So far I think there's about 20 planned for the first story. Then I start posting the sequel called Father Time's Gift. Which may get up to another 20 chapters. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Xgirl14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2011 4:18:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

You should definitely post more chapters :) I was really liking the 2 chapters at a time thing you were doing

Author's Response: Hehe, I have two more coming up in a few more minutes. I just got em back from my beta and I'm getting 'em locked and loaded. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: serafim Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2011 9:19:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very sweet chapters, then very hot. Thanks you for the early Easter present !

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. Your welcome. I will have more to post as soon as I get word back from my beta. Is the accent spelling annoying when you read it or do you like it?

Reviewer: serafim Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2011 9:01:30 PM Title: Chapter 4

Interesting take on Logan having some extended family - I look forward to how this is going to play out. :)

Author's Response: I'm still working on the lineage. It should hopefully come out sometime before the wedding. I hope you're ready for my Easter present early. I'm posting two more chapters, at least until Sat. or Mon.rnThank you for reviewing!rn

Reviewer: serafim Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2011 9:09:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

Would it be really greedy of me to want another chapter, ASAP? :)

Author's Response: Hehe, nope. I'm posting 2 to keep you entertained until tomorrow. If the WiFi gets fixed at my dialysis unit tomorrow, I'll send out more chapters. Deal?

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2011 7:35:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, I'm glad you're posting this, but I would really love to see some more on "Gunpowder and Lead". Hope you get lots of good reviews

Author's Response: LOL! Sneaky tart. Of course I will get to sending you more on that when I fix some of my bad grammar. I went to open up GP&L and I was so tired I fell asleep next to my laptop last night. The laptop has to go in for another security program instalation so we'll see how much I get done on it today.

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2011 3:39:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

very nice, cant wait for more!

Author's Response: Well alrighty then... Just for you... I was going to wait until Friday.

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