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Reviewer: serafim Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2011 6:53:31 PM Title: Chapter 23

Oh boy, what a decision! Hopefully his love for Marie will keep the feral in him under control (that is, if they decide to watch the movie)

Like how you pulled in X-Men First Class - :) Good job!

Author's Response: Hehe, I hope so too. I didn't want to give away too much of the movie... Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: serafim Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2011 2:27:01 AM Title: Chapter 22

I like the relationship that Marie had going on with Chloe - you really get across how young adolescents think - little kid one moment, sass mouthed adult the next. :)

Author's Response: Haha, yeah she can be a little witch sometimes. She reminded me so much of Marie as a teenager before she left home. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: serafim Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2011 2:18:27 AM Title: Chapter 21

Aunt Maybelle’s whore house, you poke it, you bought it.

Too funny! Another great chapter - you have me thinking in over-drive ! :)

Author's Response: LOL, I know! It came from, you break it, you bought it. Hehe, does that mean that you're adding more to Nowhere soon? I love it! Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: serafim Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2011 2:07:27 AM Title: Chapter 20

You had me going when Marie was frozen, lol, but man, what a way to wake up! Love it. :)

Author's Response: Hehe, I had a dream the night before I wrote that, that I was Marie...

Reviewer: serafim Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2011 2:03:11 AM Title: Chapter 19

I like the interaction you have going on with everyone...can't wait for the rest...:)

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I just wish I was better at description. There's more in the oven.

Reviewer: Xgirl14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2011 12:33:34 AM Title: Chapter 22

I always love where this story is going and I can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: It should be coming along very soon to a WRFA near you!

Reviewer: Xgirl14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2011 12:17:00 AM Title: Chapter 21

Omg I love this twist!! I hope Logan watches the movie soon, he deserves to know!!

Author's Response: Hehe, I'm so glad. There's more twisties coming... I figure it should happen sometime in the sequel. Thank you for your review! It makes my heart glad.

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2011 8:10:12 PM Title: Chapter 22

My guess about Logan and Marie's first date who be up in Canada.
Can't wait to see what the prof. has to say back to Logan, or what type of plans Logan and Hank come up with for the proposal. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Hehe, wish I could tell you... You'll get a hint in chapter 24. It's gonna be huge... Logan takes Chuckie down a few pegs. Thanks for your time and energy to read my story, and thanks for your review!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2011 6:40:43 PM Title: Chapter 21

you've peaked my interest. What movie? And with Hugh singing and dancing. Was it suppose to be Logan? If so I can't wait for his reaction. I'm eager for the next chapter. They are always a joy to read. keep up the great work.

Author's Response: X-Men Origins: Wolverine. No, Logan knows Hugh as a singing and dancing pansy (I personally don't feel that way... Drool!) that the X-Women go crazy for. I am a few paragraphs from sending the next two off to my beta. Yeah, these next two are going to be a wild ride. I hope you like 'em. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Xgirl14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2011 9:56:24 PM Title: Chapter 20

Oh boy, oh boy! My Internet has been down for a while and I have been just dying to get see I you updated! The last bit of this chapter got me so worried! Also I can't wait for the sequel!! Post soon!!!

Author's Response: As you mention it, I just finished chapters 21 and 22. They will be off to the beta soon. Maybe tomorrow if it doesn't rain too much. So hold your britches, more is on the way.rnThanks for your review!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2011 9:03:59 PM Title: Chapter 20

Wicked little Marie at the beginning.
I think everyone needs a vacation, from their vacation. lol.
I was a little worried at the end, but I'm glad to see that Logan was able to warm his Marie up. I'd warm up quick too if I had a Wolverine in my bed. ;)
Great work, and I look forward to the sequel.

Author's Response: LOL... They will get something in the future but, you'll have to stay tuned to find out what happens. Logan's planning a romantic evening soon so stay tuned to drool...rnHehehe, I like how that little twist worked. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2011 8:47:37 PM Title: Chapter 19

Another great chapter. Keep them coming. If I fail and have detention with Wolverine, will he at least have his shirt off. (wicked grin, and drooling) lol.

Author's Response: What if I want your shirt off instead? rnrnWolvie! {Takes back the computer} Another chapter is coming. I have just a few more things to clean up and then it's off to the beta.rnThanks for your review!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2011 11:56:27 PM Title: Chapter 18

I'm glad to see Logan didn't freak out about Marie's inner animal coming into play. I think it was great how he soothed her and accepted it. I fell sorry for logan having to ride a bus full of kids and a bathroom. Marie is definitely asking a lot of him and his poor senses. As for Logan worrying about Marie's parents, I say I don't think Wolverine would let them stop him from getting his girl. Although Logan is more sensitive, Wolverine isn't one to let anyone stand in his way of what is his, and knowing that Marie is his, and she wants him just as much. I hope Logan realizes this too. Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Damn right darlin', I won't let them stop me but, I gotta keep my girl happy too. We are, we have 4 pages to go and then chapters 19 and 20 go off to the beta.rnSo, hold your panties, more's comin'. Oh, she says to say thanks for your review.rnrnrnWolverine.

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2011 11:51:48 PM Title: Chapter 17

I'm glad to see Marie and Logan finally getting to be more intimate. However, boy what in the world came over Marie. I do believe Marie's inner Wolverine got a bit carried away, especailly if she was blacking out so she didn't even know what she was doing. Great chapter, I'm looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I'd like to know that myself. She just came to me while writing it and said to put her idea in the story. This might be the last time they get jiggy with it in this story, not sure. TrnThank you for your review!

Reviewer: serafim Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2011 10:40:26 PM Title: Chapter 18

Very funny chapter (love the bathroom in the bus and porn romm charges, lol) - hopefully Logan won't let his insecurities about Marie's parents not liking him stop him from proposing to her (yes, I think he should do it too!) Thanks for the double chapter surprise! :)

Author's Response: Oh no they won't stop him or I wouldn't have a story. Yeah, Logan has big plans for the proposal.rnrn

Author's Response: Oh no they won't stop him or I wouldn't have a story. Yeah, Logan has big plans for the proposal.rnrnThe proposal is in the sequel.rnrnThank you for your review!

Reviewer: serafim Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2011 10:36:54 PM Title: Chapter 17

Eep!

***is it hot in here or what?***

Very nice... ;) You surprised me with the clawing action at the end, but yes, that's what he needs, a woman who can keep up with him - lol

Now on to the next chapter....

Author's Response: LOL, I had to freshen it up a bit. We are almost to the end of Santa Baby. I wanted to show that they were so wild that his orgasm triggered the female feral response in Marie, showing him that she could take it a bit rough. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Xgirl14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2011 10:10:02 PM Title: Chapter 18

Nice, nice. When are we gonna find out logan's big family secret? Keep posting and I will keep reviewing :)

Reviewer: Xgirl14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2011 9:56:09 PM Title: Chapter 17

Hot hot HOT!!!!!

Author's Response: I might put up a Cold Shower Warning in the future, LOL! I'm glad you thought it was hot. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: serafim Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2011 1:46:01 PM Title: Chapter 16

I find that Logan is very sweet with Marie. That they both find comfort in each other's bodies without resorting to sex illustrated their trust and love for each other (but don't get me wrong - me like-ee the whoopee!) Very sweet chapter but I am getting worried about Logan's flashbacks.

Author's Response: Not too sweet I hope... Don't need him turning into Scott. I'm glad that is what you are reading between the lines... And I know you like the whoopee. I think there might be some coming up. Still trying to form thoughts after this weekend... I'm glad you like the chapter. Just to give you a hint, the reason why Logan's having so many flashbacks is me setting up the part where we find out the big secret of his family... So there is a method to the madness. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Xgirl14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2011 1:26:58 PM Title: Chapter 16

As what a cute chapter! And aww jubilee is pregnant! this chapter made me smile :)

Author's Response: Yeah, Chloe's getting a sibling. I'm taking a survey on boy or girl because I haven't decided on a sex yet.rnrnSo when ya'll review 17 or 18 gimme your review and vote. Thanks. Thank you foe your review.

Reviewer: Xgirl14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2011 1:11:50 PM Title: Chapter 15

Lucky girl!!! Front row! Wow lol. Loved this new chapter and I loved how all their friends and family joined them for dinner :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I was... Lucky enough to see where the sweat went... *Drools* Woo, just had a shiver come down my back. Oh and I got to see him change his shirt in the wings of the stage and OMG... I'm gathering my notes to review because I haven't been able to form a thought since I left San Francisco!rnrnI thought it was just interesting that our Professor would listen in on Logan's thoughts to take over the reservation and include everybody. I had originally intended that to be an intimate dinner between Logan and Marie, until my Xavier Muse inserted his idea in my head.rnrnThank you for your review and I am a couple pages in to the next chapter, which was pre-written, before I lost all thought.rnrn

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2011 11:28:51 AM Title: Chapter 16

Aww, my very own fanfiction present. I'm so excited and thrilled. Thank you! I love the chapter. It was so touching and loving. Poor Logan, here he is trying to enjoy himself with Marie, and he has to suffer from terrible flashbacks. There always seems to be a snake in the garden. However, I love and laughed at Logan dancing, and singing to Marie. I love my present. Now enjoy your nap you deserve it! :+D

Author's Response: LOL... What nap? I only got 3 hours of sleep last night.rnrnSorry for the problems with Logan but, he trusts that I will right him. I do have plans for all the flashbacks and visions. I'm so glad that you liked your present!rnListening to The Boy From Oz on the way home to work on chapter 17 and 18! Thank you for review as well.

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2011 9:03:48 AM Title: Chapter 15

I really enjoyed the new chapter. It's so good to see Logan and Marie finally together and happy. Enjoying each other. Loved Xavier's speech, and Logan been embarrassed about the school's on going pool for him and Marie getting together.

You lucky girl, you! Today's my birthday, so feel free to share to goods girl. I could always use a present.;D ribbet1975@yahoo.com. (Grins, Winks, and Drools)

Author's Response: Marie was more embarrassed I think. rnrnWell then your first present will be another chapter and then I will send on stuff to your email.rnrnHappy birthday and thank you for your review!

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Date: 05/15/2011 8:12:51 AM Title: Chapter 15

:-D xXx

Author's Response: :)!

Reviewer: Xgirl14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2011 8:16:46 PM Title: Chapter 14

No fair!!!! You lucky lucky LUCKY girl!! Going to see Hugh jackman!! Take me with you!! Phew...ok now that I have that out of my system... I am so happy Logan accepted! I was getting a little worried in chap 13 for a moment. I can't wait to read more once you get back from seeing HUGH JACKMAN!!!!

Author's Response: Hahaha, my beta actually gave me permission to bounce off the walls but, if I do, I won't be able to pack! Yup, and I'm taking mom as a belated mother's day prezzie. I am seeing the show 3 times so I'll see if I can grab extra programs. Would that do? I won't jinx myself by trying to get a picture with him but, we'll see about a hug. Thank you for your review!

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