Whoa. That was intense! I'm really enjoying your fiction; glad I stumbled upon it. Seriously great writing; you manage to convey so much so concisely.

Oh, Bailey....Bailey, Bailey, Bailey......what is this? While I completely see and understand the conniving, underhanded, sick obsession that Mystique would have with Logan (just like it's explained in the fic); I'm really taken aback by the dark turn you made in L&M's relationship.

Of course it would be a shock, standing there in your own doorway watching yourself get f*cked, then decapitated. And it would obviously take some severe, long term therapy to over come...but shouldn't she understand Logan's animal side just a little bit?? At least enough that would allow their relationship to survive? Probably not move any further than where they were before Mystique's little act, of course not.

I like the fic, don't get me wrong. You really nailed the Wolverine character. But somehow I don't think you gave Marie/Rogue enough credit for what her mutation allows her to take from those she touches. Especially someone like Logan who can actually survive her touch.