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Date: 05/06/2011 7:59:10 PM Title: The Declaration
Okay, I hope Marie kicks Magneto's ass!!! The sick bastard!! And she better figure out how to reverse what Magneto did to Logan too!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! Last chapter is up, so you will know all. ;-)
[Report This]Date: 05/05/2011 6:23:13 AM Title: The Declaration
Excellent chapter! Loved how Magneto managed to control Logan so easily - reminded me of an event in one of the comics when he ripped all Wolvie's adamantium out. Ouch! Magneto is probably one of the few mutants who could really do some serious damage to our favourite feral - Rogue herself being another. But she's not gonna hurt her Logan, is she? Not likely! Not when there's a cell to get out of and a power-mad rival to take care of! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Ha...go read the last chapter, and then come back to read my response to your totally prescient review. I'll wait here. ::whistling::rnrnYeah, it was sad that Rogue had to hurt Logan, but it was really the only way. I did try to throw a few breadcrumbs into earlier chapters about how oppressive the metal is, so that it would be believable that Logan would actually be relieved to find it gone. I guess in the comicverse he's lost and regained the metal at least a few times, huh? I read in a wiki that his healing factor was much improved without it, but not sure if he was ever relieved to have it gone or not.
[Report This]Date: 05/05/2011 12:43:18 AM Title: The Declaration
AAAHHHHH! How can you end it there? Oh, the cruelty...;)
Great chapter. Great story- as usual. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Sorry! Last chapter up now, which is why it took me so long to respond to your review. :-D
Date: 05/03/2011 3:46:07 PM Title: The Declaration
The John /Bobby part was touching, ouch! Cant Bobby get back to life? lol
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Yeah, I know...I started to really feel for Bobby too! Maybe you can imagine a "missing reel" in which Marie figures out how to project his consciousness into a comatose twin in Scotland. :-D
[Report This]Date: 05/03/2011 7:13:49 AM Title: The Declaration
Woman, you're MEAN. This was the worst cliffhanger so far - but great storytelling all over (as I already said). And the scene between "Bobby" and Pyro was heartbreaking. *applauds*
Author's Response: Sorry! No cliffhangers in the next (last) chapter, I promise. :-D I'm glad you liked the Bobby/Pyro scene. I have to admit, I quite grew to like Dead!Bobby. He started out as a bit of a sap in my mind, but turned out to be a stand-up guy. And he knows when to give a girl some space, unlike Inner!Logan. ;-)
Date: 05/03/2011 12:58:01 AM Title: The Declaration
oh Erik is SUCH a pain in the ass sometimes!! Wonderful last two chapters. The moments between Bobby and John were very sweet. Now Marie has to touch Mags again to fix Logan. No way she is leaving him.
Author's Response: LOL...I wonder how Erik would react to being called a pain in the ass. :-D I'm so glad you are liking the recent chapters, and that the Bobby/John stuff is sweet and not distracting too much from the main story. What? Marie can't just run off and leave Logan behind? Excuse me, I gotta go frantically rewrite... ;-)
Date: 05/02/2011 10:44:37 PM Title: The Declaration
Hey there. Sorry I'm so late on reviewing. Real life is really doing a number on me right now. :/ But, I wanted you to know how much I love this story. The love scene between Logan and Marie was awesome. The way she finally "let" herself delve into his feelings for her... so great. And now, Pyro and Bobby... sigh. Anyway, this is great. You are great. :)
Author's Response: No worries...so sorry about real life troubles! I'm so glad you're liking the story. You are great also! :-D Looking forward to updates on your stories!
Date: 05/02/2011 10:24:33 PM Title: The Declaration
EEEK!!!!! Please, please, PLEASE tell me that the other chapter is like, right in front of you, and like, you're just about to post it....right? RIGHT?!? O_o
Author's Response: Well, it's mostly done. :-D I'll aim for the end of the week!
Date: 05/02/2011 10:23:47 PM Title: The Declaration
Ah! Evil cliffhanger! But now's when the full power and fury of Rogue is unleashed... right? I'm really looking forward to that. I'm glad to hear I won't have to wait much longer, but sorry to hear the story will end soon. Sigh. Whoop! So conflicted...
Author's Response: Sorry about the cliffhanger! I thought about making this and the next all one long chapter, but it was getting too long and I wasn't sure there would be enough left over for a whole other chapter. I hope you like Rogue in the next chapter. :-D