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Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2011 7:18:23 PM Title: The Confrontation

such a great chapter and then 'he' has to appear

Author's Response: Yeah, Magneto is a mood-killer, isn't he? Thanks again for reviewing!

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2011 7:47:27 PM Title: The Confrontation

I really love this chapter! I'm so giddy over this chapter that I can't fully articulate all the many reasons why I enjoyed it so much. This was sexy, romantic and oh so sweet. Awesome!

Author's Response: :-D Thanks so much for the lovely review!

Reviewer: Cuthalion Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2011 5:00:49 PM Title: The Confrontation

I was slowly drawn into this tale, dropping in from time to time and finally finding myself waiting for each new chapter. Thank you for taking a (VERY) familiar premise and plot and writing both of our beloved heroes as refreshingly mature human beings - distrustful, hurt beyond measure and still yearning for closeness. Rogue is a strong women (even if vulnerable), and far beyond any usual fanfiction cliché, and Logan as a wonderful man, so much more than the stereotype of a cigar-smoking feral we see far too often for my personal liking. Plus that the story is full of delicious twists, packed with suspense and rimmed with breathtaking cliffhangers - bravo. I'm definitely a fan.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I'm glad you feel this is a fresh take on this premise and characters -- and that you feel that Rogue is coming across as strong despite her weepiness, I mean, vulnerability. :-)

Reviewer: Wolverette Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2011 3:42:16 PM Title: The Confrontation

Oh my .... *fans self* ...... A-hem! Before I dash off for a cold shower, there's just enough time to say a heartfelt 'well done'!!! I really enjoyed your latest chapter and can't wait for the next! Evil cliffie! You have me at the edge of my seat here!

Author's Response: :-D So glad you liked it! Sorry about the cliffhanger. :-)

Reviewer: litlen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2011 3:31:22 PM Title: The Confrontation

Very clever way to let her really see/feel the truth, definite Ahh factor throughout.

Not quite sure how Magneto got to them so easily especially on home turf? But looking forward to seeing what will happen now – two very pissed mutants, highly protective of each other, both with seriously dangerous powers - ok so Logan not much use against Magneto but Marie.....bring on Rogue and let the games begin :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! There will be a little more about how Magneto got to them so easily in the next chapter, but I did try to plant a breadcrumb in a previous chapter (remember when Logan says that it is too dangerous for Marie to go in the woods with Magneto after her, so she should garden with Ro?) to indicate that the woods around the estate are just too extensive to secure entirely from a very determined foe. Yes, the next part was quite a logic problem. You have Wolverine, who can only be restrained by adamantium, and Marie, who has control over all things metal. Very hard to figure out how to imprison them together! I hope I managed to have Magneto figure it out without it being *too* convoluted, but for the logistics of it I had to make them vulnerable to tranquilizers despite a healing factor (although it does take massive, repeated doses).

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2011 10:45:00 AM Title: The Confrontation

Okay, now is the time for Super Rogue! Seriously, the woman *knows* what Magneto is like, knows that he'll use Logan to get to her, and knows he can't be trusted. So, don't let Magneto manipulate you, Rogue! Fight! You're tough, you're badass, you've got way more up your sleeve than that villain. Don't go quietly! Damn the torpedos (or, in this case, darts) and full steam ahead! Make Mags wish he'd never even heard of you!

Okay, enough of my ranting. Thanks for the chapter! I'm still in and hooked despite my ambivalence about smut. Whoop-- on to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yeah, I've been surprised by how this Marie has turned out so far...she's a little more vulnerable (i.e., weepy) than I usually portray her. I like a kickass Rogue myself. :-D I promise she will do what she can. Glad you decided to power on despite the smut...I don't know if there will be more, probably not, but if so I will definitely warn if there is.

Reviewer: Shuttlelauncher Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2011 9:39:07 AM Title: The Confrontation

Great chapter! I love how she had jeans powers to help her and Logan move on....but crap, what a cliffhanger!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the part about Jean's powers...I was worried that it might be too much, but I wanted it to be believable for Logan to win back Marie's trust in a fairly compressed timeline and what works better than a straight-from-the-head burst of telepathy? ;-) Sorry about the cliffhanger...I'm evil that way. ;-) I think I do it as much for myself, if I get a cliffhanger in it means I know how the next chapter is going to go.

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2011 12:40:00 AM Title: The Confrontation

OH SHIT.

*ahem*

That is, great chapter, great movement on the story, and a great cliffhanger. The hardest part will be waiting for the next installment.

Author's Response: Yeah, I think that's pretty much what Logan and Marie said. ;-) So glad you liked it!

Reviewer: g-love99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2011 12:27:34 AM Title: The Confrontation

love that their relationship has progressed, cant wait to see how the mansions residents react, and love the new twist.

Author's Response: So glad you liked it! And you had to know Magneto was going to pop up somewhere, right? ;-)

Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2011 12:23:12 AM Title: The Confrontation

I wish there was a button for 100 stars!!!! k, now I have to calm down and do a proper review, lol!

She had touched him with her bare hand, and touch to Marie meant everything.

Truer words could not have been written about Rogue...

Hold on, darlin’, I’ll be coming for you...

Here was where I was like, go get her Logan, go save your Marie!!!

“Now, goddammit.”

AMEN, sister...

Then, you throw in that fantastic twist at the end, a la MAGNETO. Unbelievable, I am telling you, you had me completely rivetted. As I was reading (and believe me, I was reading as slowly as I could,) I kept looking at the side bar of my computer screen, giddy because I could tell there was so much more to go.

Now, I shall go re-read your chapter because that's just the way I roll. :)

Author's Response: You are adorable! I am so glad you liked it. I know what you mean, there are definitely authors I eye the side-bar for -- You are one of mine, so I'm so glad I'm one of yours!

Reviewer: serafim Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2011 11:58:36 PM Title: The Confrontation

omg - I haven't started reading it but I had to write to you that I AM SO EXCITED!!! WOOHOO!!! (I'll be back with my real review after I read....eek!

Author's Response: Aw...you are too sweet! Thanks so much!

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