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Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2012 11:52:21 PM Title: The Contact

FABULOUS! :D

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2011 2:16:44 PM Title: The Contact

good start.

Author's Response: Oh, bima, again I have to apologize for taking so long to respond to your reviews. I should have set up alerts long ago! Thanks for reviewing this chapter, glad you liked the set-up.

Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2011 3:23:32 PM Title: The Contact

This is truly such a beautiful story - I love how you are always able to convey how the both of them are feeling, making my sympathetic to both.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks. I'm glad they are both coming across as sympathetic! It's been really hard to try to walk that line so that it's the situation that's at fault, and not really either of their actions.

Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2011 10:55:21 AM Title: The Contact

Love it, loved how she battled him in her mind, everything. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2011 8:48:33 PM Title: The Contact

I really love this story. I've been reading on this site for at least a year now, I think, and I just joined as a member because I felt that I had to review your work. I've loved everything of yours that I've read- you're a very talented author. I can't wait until the next part!

Author's Response: Aw, that is the best compliment I've ever heard. Thanks so much for joining, and reviewing! :-D

Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2011 6:19:39 PM Title: The Contact

Just came back to give you some stars. Because you deserve them.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks, darlin'! ;-)

Reviewer: serafim Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2011 9:18:43 PM Title: The Contact

Loved it! I am so loving this story! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I am ADORING your story...I gobbled it up on my morning commute, but was on my phone so I'll try to review tonight. It is awesome!

Reviewer: DarkDragonfly Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2011 1:26:51 PM Title: The Contact

Holy cow!
I normally avoid these types of AU stories as they usually feature an almost too tough Marie but I am so glad I clicked on this one because it is amazing.

You balance Maries independence with the perfect amount of insecurity.

I laughed so hard at the "I'm....Canadian" line and the "they got you too" was heartwrenching as well as the last line of this chapter.

Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it! And that you're liking the balance of toughness and vulnerability for Marie. She is actually coming across a little more neurotic than I had expected, so it's good to see that you are not finding her to be annoyingly weak. She will show a little more strength later, of course. :-)

Reviewer: natsuki sochi Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2011 10:53:48 AM Title: The Contact

I understand Author-san wot u are trying to say I'm just saying that Marie should not have told him every single detail of her mutation (she should not firm wot he saw)she could hav told him about the killer touch and maybe the other power (u notice I say "power" not "powers") dat way she still keeps the element of suprise about the memory and power retention. Do u see wot I'm getting at? even if someone is lonely and desprate, they are still cautious how they devulge certain information about themselves espicslly wen the these information make u vunerable to anyone and wot lead u to be lonely in the first place. Tis how people get aducted coz they give too much info on themselves at the get go. Sorry Author-san I tend to want to read and discuss peoples opinion on certain topics.

Author's Response: Yep, I definitely understand what you're saying. It would be a lot wiser for her to be more reserved. To be honest, a lot of it is probably lazy storytelling on my part. It's easier to just get it all out in one explanation than to find time for them to have different conversations about it at different times. And sorry if I sounded short in my previous review, I was on my phone and it's such a pain to type on there. I really like talking about my stories, and I appreciate so much you taking the time to review and talk about them too! Definitely no need to apologize for that. ;-)

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2011 11:53:04 PM Title: The Contact

I really enjoyed the beginning of this story, hope to read more soon.

Author's Response: So glad you liked it! I should be posting more by the end of this week. :-)

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2011 8:31:23 AM Title: The Contact

his face being messed up :)

Author's Response: Ah, thanks for answering. I would have wondered forever!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2011 12:46:26 AM Title: The Contact

oohhhh I like it, I like it! More please!

Author's Response: Coming right up!

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2011 11:13:58 PM Title: The Contact

hey, good start. really look forward to reading more... hobbits away, hey!

Author's Response: Glad you're liking it! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2011 11:13:38 PM Title: The Contact

Canadian! Heh. Lucky I'm not allowed to drink coffee near the laptop anymore ... I really like the tone you are setting here; them bonding over mutual mutie protecting gives me the warm fuzzies. I can see a rocky read ahead when Marie finds out about the X-mansion, but I am sure you'll give us some more bonding moments to ooh over before the shit hits the fan. Looking forward to it!

Author's Response: Glad you're liking it! And yes, you're quite prescient about the rocky road ahead, and the bonding in the meantime. Now you know as much as I do!

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2011 9:06:53 PM Title: The Contact

As I once remarked to Rose, I am intrigued by your ideas and would like to subscribe to your newsletter. ;) That is to say, I like what I've seen so far and am eager to see the next installment.

Author's Response: Ha, my DH says that all the time. :-) We are big Simpsons fans...we even had Homer and Marge on our wedding cake instead of a bride and groom. :-)

Reviewer: Solidae Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2011 9:01:06 PM Title: The Contact

Yay!!!!!

Author's Response: Yay for you!! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Entropy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2011 8:18:28 PM Title: The Contact

Exciting intro. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: :-D Glad you're looking forward to more! Second chapter is actually coming along pretty quickly...

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2011 5:19:53 PM Title: The Contact

:-D xXx

Author's Response: :-D

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2011 5:05:24 PM Title: The Contact

very enticing. not a pretty way to meet logan but oh well.

Author's Response: Glad you find it enticing! Not pretty because of the rednecks, or because his face is messed up, or some other reason?

Reviewer: Tamana Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2011 2:02:33 PM Title: The Contact

Uuuuh I'm VERY excited about this fic. I cannot wait to read the next chapter.

I love the contrast between your story and the movies. In the movie, it is Logan who helps Marie and they're sitting in his car. But in your story it is the reverse. Refreshing. Also, I love that you didn't allow Logan to spot Marie right away. You did it very elegantly -- letting Logan think it is Blondie who's the target. It was very smart. Excellent job. More please!

Oh and I will gladly take the risk to read your work-in-progress.

Lots of love from Denmark

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it. Yeah, I think I'm made for AU in quite a few ways. Even though I've re-watched the movies since I joined the ranks of Rogan shippers, I don't feel like I know them inside-and-out enough to not piss someone off if I try to stay within the guidelines of movie lore. Plus, I like having Logan and Marie meet for the first time, it gives me something for them to do until I think of the rest of the plot. :-D And finally, I'm just not patient enough to write the years until Marie turns into an adult, and I definitely have a preference for a stronger, more adult, and not-to-mention "legal" Marie. Not that there aren't great stories that start out with a very young Marie, but I think she's more of a match for Logan when she's a little more mature. This one started with just the idea of Logan and Marie fighting side by side before they even really knew each other. And then I added a built-in reason for Logan to want to stick with Marie, since that gave me such trouble in "The Prisoner." Oh well, more than you wanted to know, I'm sure!

Reviewer: Melancholy Rogue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2011 12:41:03 PM Title: The Contact

Oh, I like it. Very curious as to where this is going to go. :)

Author's Response: Yay! Glad you like it. I'm also curious to see where it's going. I do have the first bit mapped out in my head now, which will probably be longer than I thought since what I think of as only a few events often ends up eating chapter after chapter...

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2011 11:46:54 AM Title: The Contact

Your four guarantees are four of the many reasons why I love your stories! Not surprisingly, you've hooked me with the setup and your first chapter. Oh who am I kidding, you had me at the new story email alert, LOL!

Ironically, yesterday I saw one of your reviews for Sleeping Dogs and it made me wonder and hope that you would be posting a new story soon. And whaddaya know? I get a new story alert about you today. Pretty cool! I'll try to only use my powers for good and not evil. ;)

Anyway, I'm psyched that you're back and I'm looking forward to reading the next installment.

BTW, the line about Charles texting like a 12 year old girl was priceless!

Author's Response: Why, hello, my psychic friend! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I'm so honored you have me on story alert. :-) Yeah, I also liked the line about Charles texting, it seemed to have an irreverence that was purely Logan. And don't be surprised if there's a plot point later related to that...

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