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[Report This]Date: 01/02/2016 12:34:29 AM Title: Chapter 3
'Helping us gather intel. It's what she's here for.'
Sweet Jesus, that hammer to the noggin is so beautifully written and so slyly played that I actually welcomed the blow, brain-splitting as it was.
I'm too busy reading now to berate myself for not reading past Chapter 1 of this fic when you originally posted it, but rest assured I will be mentally and virtually lashing myself to a bloody pulp after I get caught up. -- Wendie
Author's Response: **blushing, giggling, bouncing in my slippers** I forgot how good this felt, Moviemom!
Date: 04/18/2011 6:36:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
"Scott was a much better pilot these days. Logan couldn't quite recall when this change had come to be." Tee hee. Yes, it's always easier to remember when someone's a fuck up.
So glad I read this after eating. Yum, bloodlust to go with my meatless tacos.
"Her eyes were bloodshot, like the most devoted of students or alcoholics." So good. So true. Such a good fucking observation.
I'd accuse you of being a tease if you weren't so damn generous with your descriptions.
Author's Response: Yes! >punches air< I wrote those line thinking of you. I *knew* you'd see them. I *knew* it! Thank you!!!!!
Date: 03/27/2011 2:08:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
Yes, definitely an odd chapter. I got a little confused while reading it. If it were anyone else's story, I probably would have skipped it. But it's You. So, no can do. But everyone else seems to get it? It's probably me then? Anyway, I'm looking forward to read chapter 4. Hurry, willya?? xD
Love,
Tamana
Author's Response: Oh no! I'm so sorry. If you let me know what you were unsure about, I'd be happy to try to explain/apologize emphatically for whatever was unclear. Send me any questions you have, okay?
[Report This]Date: 03/22/2011 8:03:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
‘Alrighty, so not the shorter fic I'd intended. I'm guessing this will have twice as many chapters as I'd originally estimated’........and I find myself saying Yessssssssssss!! when not so long ago I would have run for the hills. Now this is the power of fantastic writing x take as damn well long as you like and add as many flippin chapters as you like I could read this all day, I’m loving every word and it is in no way rambling when read and I don’t find it remotely odd either unless odd is the new word for amazing in which case its really odd!
p.s. just a little shout for observations….the boy is good isn’t he? Nothing gets past our Logan, loved that last one, how long before sparks fly and he tells them to back the fuck off I wonder?
Author's Response: Haha! You are the *sweetest*. You always manage to say the think that can lift me right out of a writing funk. Thank you. I cannot say how happy I am to read these words.
Date: 03/21/2011 3:11:06 AM Title: Chapter 3
Looking forward to the next bit!
[Report This]Date: 03/17/2011 10:25:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm really enjoying the writing style of this story! Kudos and a half! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Really? That's excellent to hear, thank you so much!!
Date: 03/17/2011 6:02:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
Ah, your mission unaccomplished. Dutifully awaiting for you to finish up my thoughts with another awesome chapter.
Because no reader should be left behind.
LOL,
Good Job!
Author's Response: Coming right up. I'm extraordinarily glad you think so.
[Report This]Date: 03/17/2011 2:11:05 AM Title: Chapter 3
Excellent as always. I really like the imagery you're using. The conflict between Logan and the Wolverine feels so harsh. I also liked the contrast of the animal holding back the man instead of the reverse.
Author's Response: Awww, thank you! I can't describe how much that means to me. >hugs very tightly<
[Report This]Date: 03/16/2011 10:45:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love, love, LOVE this chapter. Where to start? Fascinated by the idea of Rogue using her powers in a different way.
These lines are so exquisitely wonderful, if you had posted them alone this would have still been a 5-star chapter:
Logan breathed in the fumes of what he had done, watched particles only he could see swirl, a dance just for him. His heart was pounding, a furious, fleshy beast, the determined engine of a ship in turbulent water.
I really like the moment where you comment on the rarity of Wolverine restraining Logan rather than vice versa.
One thing did confuse me. Did you really mean to say home twice here, or was the ivory-something meant to be something else?
civilian in a war-zone who's just watched an ivory home turn his home into dust
Author's Response: Oh, yes. Definitely a typo! Ugh.That first "home" was supposed to be "explosion". My bad... :~) I'm so very glad that you liked this--your review sparked a pretty good day for me. >hugs<
Date: 03/16/2011 5:50:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wonderful,amazing,magnificent,staggering,phenomenal!!!
There are not enough adjectives to describe how much I love this fic.
Author's Response: Oh, mess. I wish I could hug you. Thank you so, so, so much. This put a huge smile on my face.