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[Report This]Date: 02/08/2018 11:31:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm so glad you are back!! I have been reading this since it was first posted and often reread it.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, that makes me so happy.
Date: 02/04/2018 4:17:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Lol. "Telekinetic castration. What's yours?"
Love the vivid description and detail of this chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2018 9:52:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ahhhhh. I love that you have updated this!
Author's Response: Thank you, so do I! :)
Date: 04/09/2016 10:23:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hoping you got my e-mail exlaining my absence....keep it going, i promise i will get back to it asap. xxx
Author's Response: Getting back to things asap no longer seems to be one of my abilities. I hope you'll see this notification and forgive the long silence...as well as another email, mentioning a new story...**bites nails**rnrnOld friend, I would love to know what you think of it.
Date: 01/02/2016 12:45:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Omg, you updated!!!!! I squealed when I got my notification about the update. We appreciate any updates you can give us. I reread this fic and am so glad to read more. Thanks for a surprising, awesome start to 2016!
Author's Response: I can't even begin to tell you how sweet that is or how much these simple, considerate words of support mean--in this message, or in the last review you left, which I was too sheepishly Writers Blocked to answer. Anyway, it's very kind of you. Thanks for taking the time to make a stranger smile in the new year!
Date: 07/10/2012 10:25:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just read this fic. Amazing! I know its been over a year, but please update?
Date: 07/12/2011 2:18:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ohmygod,whythehellaretherenospacesinmylastreview?I'msosorry!!
Date: 04/27/2011 7:15:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
There I had managed a Lent cleared of sitting around wasting my time, and now this storymust come and remind me that not all reading of fan-fiction is wasted... Ah, well.
Love the thoughtful Logan, even more the Rogue whose dead-pan snarkiness is ingrained beyond weariness to erase. Rich, full texture of sensual impressions; great especially in contrast with the taciturn outward demeanour.
Tantalising how the setup of this story ('Ro gone, Jean there) is only slowly revealed.
Too much Nabokov, methinks though, to the point where the flowery expressions become a veritable jungle of poetic shoots and vines the seem pretty unconnected to occasion or character at times.
And of course, I should review aftert the last published chapter, or at least check that these observational gems have not yet, by some strange and unforseeable coincidence, been uttered by some other reviewer, but if we wait around for that to happen, another age is likely to swing past. So here you go. :-)
Date: 04/20/2011 5:25:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nah, no need to feel silly. It's not really very obvious, is it? ^_^
Date: 04/18/2011 6:29:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hee! Actually, my username comes from bay + belletrist. I live in the SF Bay Area, and I aspire to be a belletrist, a write of belles lettres, which is a French and fancified way of saying beautiful words. No Harry Potter ref here, although I do enjoy the books and films. ^_^
Author's Response: Oh, mess....>clears throat<....I feel like a jack@$$.....my bad....Haha. :~D The true meaning is much lovelier than my impression. Good pick.
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2011 1:17:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just wanted to let you know that you are the reason why I'm trying at this fanfiction stuff - I have read every story you have written and each and every time, I just sit there, mouth open. You're like a chef, the way you effortlessly throw words together to convey emotion and atmosphere, it's just so PERFECT. Even though I take my time reading each word, I still go back to re-read it, just to experience everything all over again. I love this story, and no matter how long you need to put up another chapter, I will always read it, and re-read it. Everyone who has reviewed this latest chapter already pretty much nailed every line I loved, so if I may, "Ditto" to what they said! :)
Author's Response: Effortlessly? Only if that word's definition has been altered to involve ripping your hair out. But thank you, thank you so much I have tears in my eyes and have reread this a shameful number of times. This means so much to me--I'll be looking to this after a bad day for a long time. Thank you, thank you, thank you. I can't say it enough.
Date: 03/29/2011 6:38:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Fie on that restaurant! Fie! Withholding Rose's eggrolls is weaksauce, people, now come on. Maybe you can channel Logan for just long enough to ask for what you paid for? Because me, I am too old for that sh*t (she said, at the ripe age of almost-40).
Also, you're welcome. ;)
Author's Response: I know, right?! >shakes head sadly< I'm glad you understand my pain--you're much less of a wimp than I am. :~D Thanks....Oh, mess. That would make an excellent bunny for a foof fan, wouldn't it? Of course, Logan would be all, "I got your eggroll right here, Lady."
[Report This]Date: 03/28/2011 6:45:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
While keeping the transition between themes in chapters makes sense it does not mean I cant be upset with you for making me wait even longer for more development!!
This was...brutal...in a good way, the pain and just...rawness in Rogue and the internal war of Logan was just amazing.
Author's Response: Oh, lord. I want to hug you and run around screaming at the same time...it'd be a little awkward, sprinting in circles while giving someone a bearhug, but I think we could do it. Thank you very very very much.
Date: 03/05/2011 3:16:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Happy to see you here again! I'm intrigued to see where this is going, cause it's vey different than what you usually write. Definitely different in a good way! Do I need to say more? Just keep it coming.
Favorite line "and her locks--streaked white through yet another fashion beyond his comprehension or patience"
Lots of love from Denmark
Author's Response: Happy to see *you* again. Hafta say, you're kinda my hero after your last reviews. Thank you very much; I hope you continue to enjoy this piece.
Date: 02/28/2011 5:27:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting beginning, Id like to know where this is going. Also I would like to have a better knowledge of the english language because there are lines where I can understand about 65% of what youre writting, lucky me Google toolbar has a translator feature that always comes in handy when reading your stories. Good to have you back ;)
Author's Response: Ummm...Exposing my ignorance here...New Zealand isn't an English-speaking country? I'm sorry, will absolutely try to speak more clearly in the future. Thank you so much; great as ever to have the pleasure of your name on this review page.
[Report This]Date: 02/28/2011 12:04:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
OK..I have decided that no matter the plot Im going to read anything you write from this day forward...seriously your use of words could make even the most useless drivel (Ahem,Twilight) breathtakingly interesting...you should write books..lots of books so that I dont have to drive to the library on my lunch breaks just to see if you have updated.
Author's Response: OK...If you weren't a girl, and we weren't online, and if I weren't (somewhat) sane, I would ask you to marry me. That's how much I love you for this. Thank you, thank you, thank you.
[Report This]Date: 02/28/2011 9:47:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful beginning! I felt like I was swimming in sime lush jungle pool, the imagery was breathtaking. More Please.
Author's Response: Giant grin on my face. Thank you so, so much. More? Absolutely.
[Report This]Date: 02/28/2011 9:28:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it! So many unanswered questions set up so elegantly -- where is Ororo? Why has the mansion gone to seed? And I agree about liking the potential for sassy Rogan action. I am so excited you started a new fic so soon. :-D
Author's Response: So soon? Lord, I've been stressing out over how long it has taken me to write this chapter. :~D I am immensely glad that you liked it, and hope you continue to do so.
Date: 02/28/2011 1:26:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
Go ahead and untwist your guts, Rose dear. You have, as they say, done it again. Sign me up. Your gift for metaphor alone is reason to read anything you post, let alone the ever-growing, always-thought-provoking list of ways you find to introduce Logan and Rogue to one another. And as for the shift in style and the influence of Nabo-whoever-the-hell-that-is...one of the best things about your stories is that they make me THINK. This one is no exception. Oh, and I am inclined to hate you for being so damn prolific while you're at it. Not that I'd ever wish for you to be otherwise, but you might as well know I am jealous as hell. Yep, that's my story and I'm stickin' to it. --Wendie
Author's Response: Prolific? *PROLIFIC??!!* Oh, mess. Lord Almighty. You can't imagine the relief, the gratitude, the bliss that came from reading this. I hopped around like an idiot, crowing in a distinctly humiliating and unavoidably high-pitched voice, "Prolific! Prolific! She called me prolific!" I can't stop beaming. I wish there were some better words for "Thank You" than just "Thank You", but that, alas, is what I'm stuck with.(Vladamir Nabokov? He wrote Lolita, among a dozen other lesser-know but exquisitely creepy classics.)
[Report This]Date: 02/28/2011 1:07:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
Every time I think I'm out, you pull me back in! I wish I had the patience to wait until you were finished with posting a story before I read it all whole, because waiting for updates of any my fave authors and stories is a peculiar kind of torture. But I like your stories so much that when I see your name on it I'm too exciting for something new by you that I have to start reading it right away. You shouldn't be stressed or worried about the reception when you submit the start of a new story because your writing is so good and your stories are just amazing.
I’m excited to see how it will turn out and I’m just going to have to suck it up and deal with the fact that real life keeps people from being able to finish and update as quickly as I might like, and that's ok. :) Thanks!
Author's Response: I am infinitely, supremely, emphatically happy for your impatience! A review from you is the greatest kind of reward.
Date: 02/27/2011 9:39:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am intrigued by your ideas and wish to subscribe to your newsletter. *clicks Add to Favorites*
Author's Response: I am pleased by your interest and more so for your subscription. *gives Super Tight Hug*
Date: 02/27/2011 9:09:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hmm... interesting. I'm definitely curious to see what happens next. :)
Author's Response: Awesome. I'm very, very glad you are!
[Report This]Date: 02/27/2011 8:19:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Omg, Rose?! Is your Marie going to dabble in a little sass?!?!!? I LOVE SASSY!MARIE.
"Telekinetic castration." Loved it.
From the very. first. fucking. sentence I knew I was in for something.....sumptuous? Yes, that's what your writing is. It's like gorging on a box of Godiva that you had originally planned on sharing with someone. It's so good, too good. Too much, but you still want more.
"He liked the rain, though the predator in him was considering the cold and the unrelenting Wet--which heightens some scents, and hopelessly blurrs others--with a wrinkled nose and a stiff jaw." I like the capitalization in this sentence & the positive/negative spin on the weather.
" There was a sundial in the center of the courtyard, a proud project of last year's shop class, and his gaze returned to it again and again though it's face was uselessly dark and weeping now." This too. I loved that you used the word "face" & "weeping", throwing back to its use as a clock...which has a face. Just. Brilliant. How do you think of something like this?
I could go on & on, but I'd be copy/pasting the entire damn thing. You are really just too damn good.
Author's Response: Quite pleased to know that you were drinking when you wrote this; it makes the writing much better (perhaps there's a formula for that? Like your blood alcohol level multiplied by the real worth of the story?). Si, si, un poco sass-o por Marie. I wish I could give you a lifetime supply of Godiva chocolate for this, and perhaps something whipped and vanilla-flavored to apply to whatever body part of Hugh Jackman you prefer.