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Reviewer: annie77 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2011 10:19:49 PM Title: The Wildness

oh my god! *_*
He alternated between admiring her -- so adorable and fuckable that he wanted to cuddle and corrupt her all at once - Loved that line n_n

Author's Response: Glad you liked that line. :-) Thanks so much for your review!

Reviewer: Nimriel_Silverwood Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2011 9:46:00 PM Title: The Wildness

why for you leave it there?!?!?!?!?!

Author's Response: Sorry! I rushed the final chapter, just for you! ;-)

Reviewer: Nimriel_Silverwood Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2011 11:22:43 PM Title: The Lesson

update!!!!!!!!!!!*pretty please with solid dark chocolate bunnies?*

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! Hopefully this weekend, if not sooner. I got stuck with the next smutty chapter and skipped ahead to write the chapter after that, and now I'm going back. If it helps, the next smutty chapter is shaping up to be very loooong.

Reviewer: annie77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2011 6:19:32 PM Title: The Lesson

Sorry about that mistaken 1 star. I didnt notice it until I read your reply :/ I deleted my comment so the start dont affect your rating

Author's Response: Ha, no worries. I'm just glad you're not mad. I expected to get at least a few flames with a Hooker!Logan story! ;-) I think the stars work independently from the reviews, since deleting didn't change it. Of course, if you really want you can try giving it a different star rating to see if it will override the last. But I don't mind leaving it as it is, either. I'm just so glad people are reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: annie77 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2011 8:05:00 PM Title: The Lesson

wow...hot! me want more XD

Author's Response: So glad you liked it!

Reviewer: annie77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2011 7:23:06 PM Title: The Scrapper

Logan as a whore? OK, no way Im missing this haha

Author's Response: Yeah, I edited the description so that people would have to read the first chapter to realize I wasn't off my wagon. From the moment I took "man-whore Logan" out of the story summary my hit rate doubled! ;-) Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: QueenC86 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2011 4:59:41 PM Title: The Scrapper

Wow I'm really loving this story, I love how you've wrote both Logan and Rogue. And the latest chapter, can I just say I was running for a VERY cold shower. cant wait to see what else might happen, I have some thoughs in mind but I'm holding on to them because I really want to see what you write.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're liking it! And isn't imagining what these two might get up to the best part? ;-) Thanks so much for your review!

Reviewer: litlen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2011 9:04:28 AM Title: The Lesson

Extremely cruel to leave it there ;)
Very nicely written. You’ve got the underlying connection between them, you definitely get the feeling something deeper than sex is happening. Looking forward to reading more. Well done x

Author's Response: So glad you're liking it! And yes, sorry for the chapter break. I'll have to figure out what comes next. Besides, ya know, "more sex."

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2011 8:08:01 PM Title: The Lesson

Brain. Has. Melted. /faints/

Author's Response: /fans Oracle desperately/ I prescribe one Slurpee. Best cure for brain meltage there is. ;-) Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2011 6:05:57 PM Title: The Lesson

wow!!! score one for Marie! LOL That was HOT! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: So glad you liked it! :-D

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2011 3:53:31 PM Title: The Lesson

Guh. Cold shower now.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! :-D

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2011 2:36:06 PM Title: The Lesson

Oh my. What have you done to my not-so-delicate non-Southern not-really-sensibilities?

Nice mix of smut & sweetness. Don't know if you were going for that, but that's what I got from it.

That & a case of the vapors

Author's Response: I do declare, your review is making me swoon! ;-) Thanks!

Reviewer: Tamana Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2011 1:47:40 PM Title: The Lesson

Oh Lord... I'm blushing so hard. You have a deliciously filthy mind, doc! -giggles-

Now if you don't mind, more please!

Author's Response: Yeah, I definitely blushed writing it! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Solidae Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2011 12:49:43 PM Title: The Lesson

That was so hot! I might have to take care of something before I head off to the grocery store. ~blush~

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reviewing! Hope you got your shopping done anyway. ;-)

Reviewer: Ella Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2011 11:48:23 AM Title: The Lesson

Oh my, that was incredible! Your writing is so descriptive without being cheesy. Keep up the good work. More please.

Author's Response: Yay! I always worry about the cheese factor, so it's very reassuring to know that you didn't think I went over the line. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Melancholy Rogue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2011 11:47:58 AM Title: The Lesson

My goodness, that was ... really something. This was an excellent chapter and very well written. I can only imagine what the next chapter will bring. :)

Author's Response: So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2011 11:13:03 AM Title: The Lesson

WOW! That was incredibly hot. I'm fanning myself here, hehe.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2011 10:49:31 AM Title: The Requirements

Oh...my...god. This is GREAT! I'm really loving it so far. I could totally see Logan in this sort of role, and I sense things are about to get QUITE interesting. Keep writing, keep writing :D

Author's Response: So glad you're liking it! Thanks so much for reviewing. :-)

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2011 8:55:42 AM Title: The Requirements

I'm really digging this. As another reviewer said, you've managed to make this sweet and romantic. It's not just wham-bam-thank you, ma'am (not that there's anything wrong with that, BTW). I like the fact that you are building up to it, and it is not too slow either. You can see Marie's loneliness and her need to connect with someone and how see seems to have this instant chemistry with Logan, how they are drawn to each other. On the surface this whole scenario could come across as cheap and trashy in someone else's hands but you have handled it beautifully. Like I said, it's a great mix of angst and romance--very cool. As always, looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much Oracle!

Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2011 5:42:06 PM Title: The Requirements

When I read your description, I flinched initially, but sold? Yes. Signed, sealed and delivered, I think. I am astonished you have managed to make this both credible and possibly even heartwarming and romantic. More, please.

Author's Response: Yes, I flinched myself at the idea. Which is partly why it stuck in my mind, I really got stuck on *what*, if any, set of circumstances might lead Logan onto that path. I think that's why the set-up is so long, the smex is really incidental. But still fun. :-) Next chapter I'll try to make it a little more believable for Marie to be there too. And honestly, Logan is not really a whore. It's just a flimsy excuse to get the two of them in bed even though they are virtual strangers.

Reviewer: litlen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2011 5:34:18 AM Title: The Requirements

Having read and loved Beth’s’ xxx mansion’ many years ago and having done my own version of Logan the ’whore’ I felt I had to review because I found that it’s one of those scenarios that is liked by more people privately than publicly! [Although some readers don’t seem to be able to handle anything au, this is one thing they like but for some reason won’t admit to liking!]

Chapter 2’s title made me laugh! Great start, very nice set up - a whole nights experience to be explored giving you endless possibilities!! Love it :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I appreciate the moral support. Those of us with filthy minds should stick together, right?

Reviewer: jenniferjwva Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2011 10:20:40 PM Title: The Requirements

Ohhh... very nice. And, I loved the line:

"I want him to pretend like he really wants me."

There was just something sad in that line.

Can't wait to read more! :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I am such a damn sucker for a little side of angst and pathos with my smut, and Marie just has so much potential for that. Glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: Nimriel_Silverwood Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2011 10:17:18 PM Title: The Requirements

yay!!! Im happy you updated!!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm happy you reviewed! :-D

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2011 9:43:48 PM Title: The Requirements

This is getting good. Without the right amount of build up this could easily slip into a toss away PWP, so I'm glad that you're indulging your muse and setting the stage like this. I mean, don't get me wrong - I love me some good ol' fashioned smexing, but the bit about what Marie wants is going to allow you to really...uh...ahem... explore your options so to speak.

So with that...Smut Away!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much for reviewing again. Glad you're not finding the slow build-up too onerous. The third chapter is also shaping up to be some very sloooow smexing, but at least I'm getting there!

Reviewer: immiD Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2011 4:39:47 AM Title: The Scrapper

Love it! keep it up! :D

Author's Response: Glad you liked it -- thanks so much for your review!

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