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[Report This]Date: 01/24/2017 7:11:07 PM Title: Chapter 6
Amazing. So well written. I absolutely love how the characters are written in this. Congratulations on a fantastic piece.
[Report This]Date: 06/01/2013 8:23:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
Okay, I'm sorry but I appear to be a world class bitch. I've read this about a dozen times now and just realized that I never reviewed it.
This story is amazing. I could feel the tension, the pain, the loss, then the joy.... oh the joy. I could feel the sun shining on them and laugh with them about how early it was. I can feel the wind in my hair as they go on that ride to celebrate her new life together.
Amazing storytelling. Thank you!
Author's Response: Oh, please, you are NOT so NO WORRIES!! I am just absolutely THRILLED that you have enjoyed the story enough to read it more than once, let alone to take the time to comment. (And happy that something told me to hop back on this Site today, otherwise I would have missed the comment completely!)
Author's Response: Oh, please, you are NOT so NO WORRIES!! I am just absolutely THRILLED that you have enjoyed the story enough to read it more than once, let alone to take the time to comment. (And happy that something told me to hop back on this Site today, otherwise I would have missed the comment completely!) Thank you SO MUCH for the kind words, you made my afternoon :-)
Date: 04/15/2011 3:32:09 AM Title: Chapter 6
I liked it I just wished there had been more detail on Rogue's part about her getting rescued :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy that you liked it overall, and I'm sorry that there wasn't any detail from Rogue's POV regarding her rescue. I guess I felt that, by that point, she wasn't overly cognizant of what was going on, with the revelations that she was 'safe' coming later (and kind of shown in Chapter 1) for her. I didn't want to overlap the two scenes really, but I guess a bit more detail wouldn't have gone amiss, so my apologies! Thank you for reading and reviewing. They make my day :-)
[Report This]Date: 04/08/2011 6:05:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow, it's impossible to pick my favorite line from this. It took me so long and I got it narrowed down to:
A whispered, purring endearment tickles the back of her mind - telling her she did good
or
There is blood congealing on his clothes, and he can't seem to stop the low growl rumbling in his chest, or the retract-release retract-release motion of his claws that he makes with each step.
I love how you treat Logan's claws throughout the fic...how they are close to the edge of his skin at times, how they reflect his tension. I thought everything there was to say about his claws had been said, but you manage to make it new and interesting and as much a part of his character as they really are. Just really a great touch.
They say that there's a moment, just before the world comes crashing down, when a person's whole life flashes before their eyes. When that moment happens to Rogue, there are more than twenty lives sharing the space of a few seconds.
Author's Response: Oh, I love hear what lines folks like the most! The first two you picked out I actually kept going back to edit, and then stopped myself and didn't, so it's good to hear that you think they work! As for Logan's claws, they are definitely a part of him that I can't help but focus on, such a good indicator of his mood, I think. (I'll admit, they sort of fascinate me, so if I manage not to go overboard with referencing them, and made it work, I am THRILLED.) Thank you AGAIN for all your kind words, it's so very appreciated, and completely makes my day :-)
Date: 04/06/2011 8:11:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
Beautiful. Truly, just a beautiful story. Bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm so happy that you enjoyed, and thanks for sticking around until the finish :-D
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2011 5:19:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
10/10 for style and content, you never disappoint on either count and this fic has done nothing but continually climb up my all time fav list. I love the back and forth with past and present and pov which you get extra credits for cause as I’ve said before I’m not usually a huge fan! Great pace and flow, beautifully descriptive with every little detail covered. Very eloquently written and thouroughly enjoyable to read.
Very hard to only pick only one line from this chapter but the winner is....... ‘It's cold in her cell, and colder in her mind. A blank canvas that was once a chaotic work of art, wiped clean from spilled turpentine, leaving tracks of color at the edge.’
Author's Response: You know that you just made my morning, right? Seriously, I get nervous every time I post a chapter, and comments like yours just make it all worth it. I'm still so happy that the back and forth POV worked for you. I knew it was a gamble when writing, but it just felt like the best way to tell the story, and it's good to know that I am not alone in thinking that it worked! (And that line was one of my favorites when I wrote it, so THANK YOU for picking it out!) Really, again, THANK YOU. Your support has been wonderful. (New fandoms can be scary things sometimes, ya know?)
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2011 5:08:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh, this is marvelous. So very much worth the wait. The language is graceful and elegant; you never set a foot wrong. Thank you so much.
Author's Response: Yay!! Thank you for the lovely comments, and for being willing to finish this, despite the delay in posting. I can't tell you what that means to me. So just, thanks!
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2011 4:51:19 PM Title: Chapter 6
Holy wow! I'll write more when I'm not on my phone, but that was perfect and beautiful and I'm so very sad that it's over even though the ending was great.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! (And reviewing on a phone is a pain, I know, so doubly thank you for leaving this!) I'm glad that the ending worked for you, as I waffled on it a bit, trying to get it right, so it's nice to know some people think I did! *deep sigh of relief*