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Reviewer: thatcraftykid Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2011 5:09:24 PM Title: Chapter 2

I love, love how you've got this set up. All the sweet possibility of the before and the horrifying uncertainty of the after...ugh. So sad. So great.

And addictive. I don't want to stop reading here! But it's late. Tomorrow, I'll be back for sure.

Author's Response: Oh, rock! So glad that you are liking this so far (and getting sleep is always a good thing, no worries there). I can't tell you how good it is to hear that people are enjoying the before/after set up. I really had been worried about that. rnrnThank you so much for reading and commenting! Makes my day :-D

Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2011 9:10:49 AM Title: Chapter 2

Damn, another fantastic chapter! I love the little interactions with Jean. And you really communicate Marie's distress without her being all teenage-melodrama-y. Thanks for this...I'm sad to move on because I know it's the last chapter written so far...

Author's Response: You are totally making my night right now, do you know that? I'm thrilled that you liked the Jean interactions!! I'm an equal-opportunity character lover, so Jean and I get along :-) I'm also glad that Marie isn't coming across as melodrama-y. I want her to be believable, so it's good to hear that.

Reviewer: jenniferjwva Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2011 6:06:40 PM Title: Chapter 2

Geesh, this fic is going to be the death of me! lol

Poor Rogue. Poor Logan.

And dang... the beginning (the before part) seemed so nice, like they were so on their way to "something".

"You got some happiness on your mouth there, Logan."

Sigh... I LOVE that line.

Author's Response: "the beginning (the before part) seemed so nice, like they were so on their way to "something"." *Nods* Agreed. I felt kind of bad for the little twist at the end, but it was always supposed to go that way, and I hadn't quite expected the whole before scene to be so darn nice! But I was happy with where it ended up, so I left it alone. And that line is my favorite in the chapter, so I'm glad that you liked as well!! Thanks SO MUCH for taking the time to read and comment!

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