Holy cow, this is getting better and better! I love all the details...the tinny smell of the air conditioning versus the rubber of the road. And the language is so clever without being "overwritten," Logan bathing in her scent like a lapdog, how you say "her drawl pulls his attention from the back of his eyelids" instead of just "he opened his eyes when he heard..." And the contrast between their easy, unspoken relationship before and the current crisis is just great. On to the next chapter -- please promise not to leave this one unfinished, I can already tell I would be devestated!

Author's Response: Oh, wow, THANK YOU!! I'm really glad to hear that you don't think it's being 'overwritten' as I really do try to avoid that. And thanks for pointing out what lines really worked for you, I LOVE finding out stuff like that, so helpful, ya know? (And I promise I'm going to finish this!! So, no worries!)

I swear I am just captivated by your story. Each chapter holds me utterly spellbound until I finish, and then I can hardly wait for the next.

Author's Response: That is a lovely compliment. Really it is. Thank you! Here's hoping that the next update keeps your interest.

This chapter was wonderful. Liked the very natural, believable feel to the first half, the right balance between what is essentially friendship/trust and the unknown deeper feelings lurking beneath the surface. The second half again was wonderful – pain coming across to the reader from both sides – loved the haunting feel to 'all gone' so simple yet very, very effective,

A couple of extra specials:
‘Needle-sharp teeth of uncertainty gnawing away at him as he waits’
‘His frustration tangles uselessly with the remaining threads of his patience.’
All bow down to the great use of words in these two lines – off the scale good!

Keep it coming because it’s beautiful to read, look forward to the next chapter x

Author's Response: Again, THANK YOU for pointing out what lines you liked! It is oh-so-helpful to hear that sort of thing, helps keep the inspiration levels up. I'm also thrilled that you felt their relationship seemed to flow naturally. I really was hoping it would come across that way, so that about made my morning to read. I'm happy that you are still on-board with the fic, and thank you for taking the time to comment!!