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Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2011 11:55:51 PM Title: Chapter 3-Exposed

aww cute... Great chapter.

I have to say the name changes are confusing. anna, rogue, marie.. Its distracting to see one and then another in the next paragraph. Most people with more than one name still only use one regularly.

Author's Response: Thanks for your comment! In a few chapters down the line, Marie tells Logan why she dosen't go by Anna; and eventually, she learns about his first name of James. It was intended to show the growing trust of the 2 characters in each other, but i'm glad you mentioned it.rn Lisa

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