o geese, I love your story, and this chapter was probably my favorite. I wanted to write a long review, but now I am at a little loss of what to say, mainly because I haven't totally stopped laughing my ass off.

I really don't know whether I want to be Rogues best friend or too stay away from her, personality wise. The rogue you created reminds me a lot of myself, though the whole lady thing annoys me a bit. Maybe it's just because that's where we differ. I might be a lady (physically wise), and I might be polite and nice, but I am no "Lady" when it comes down to it... that just comes from hanging around too many boys growing up, and my brother deciding he wanted to "train" me and my sis to become more like little brothers to him then little sisters XD

And for Jean; I really wanna slap her >.> I like your interpretation of Jean though, you actually give her a base line for why she acts and why, and you explains her motives as well.

And I love your Scott. I really never had much of a problem with Scott, having seen his character development while reading through various x-men comic books, though I still have a bit of a grudge against him, because when it comes down to it, Scott will always have a rod-up-his ass, and needs to loosen up!(:P) But what I was trying to get at, though, is that it really annoys me when people make Scott evil in their stories, because I think Scott might be many things, but never intentionally evil. That's my opinion, at least.

As for constructive criticism, I really don't have much, because I really enjoy your style of writing and your plot so far. Though I guess there's always the usual -- grammatical errors, typos, and sometimes I find the story a bit hard to understand, and I have to re-read a passage a few times, but hey, maybe its just me, 'cause I tend to do that a lot with everything I read. My eyes read faster then my mind can comprehend, if that makes any sense, so I kind of trip over myself, reading wise.

Keep up the good work!! And write more Kurt an' Tony, ah love those 2

That was a really cute conceit w/Errol Flynn/Tony Stark & their dbl lives. Even funnier that Logan was the one w/the scoop. Nice slice-of-life moment b/w Marie-Kurt-Logan.

You're also doing a very good job writing the conflicted feelings of Charles & Jean on the current status of Logan's relationship w/Marie. Logan & Jean's confrontation in his old office was well executed. GOod lines.

More please!