The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive
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Okay, I'm sticking with this story because of this chapter. I'll be honest, I didn't leave reviews for some of the other chapters because I didn't quite know what to say. You are obviously a very good writer -- your language is wonderful. Your characterization of Logan, though, was making it a little hard to read. I definitely understand not making him perfect, and even going beyond rough-around-the-edges, but in some of the previous chapters I felt like I was just reading about an abusive relationship, and it just gave me kind of an icky feeling. I really just wanted Marie to get clear of this guy. I'm glad to see that they are finding a little more of a connection.
Wow! :) I really like your idea and you write it very realistic!
oooohhhh im excited for the next chapter!
I LOVE the idea of this story. I am really curious to see where you are going with this.
I do have to say though the pacing was kinda fast. It felt kinda like I was racing through it. Maybe a little more detail would slow it down some. Other than that its really good. I can't wait for the next chapter!
I like it. I'm curious to see how you will continue this, because as you've mentioned, the other X-Men do not exist, yet you've mentioned the news on Mutant matters. Anyway, as I said I like this fic. But make me love it :)
Author's Response: When I said the X-Men didn't exist, I simply meant the team. Mutants are real, but Professor Xavier never started the X-Men. I'm glad you liked it so far :)
I'm intrigued. You have more than decent writing skills. I'll be sticking around.
~Mia
=) Please write more. Just a helpful hint: Put spaces in between dialogue lines. It helps to make reading it easier.
Author's Response: Thanks for the tip :P