Hey,
I really liked your story, it's a bit of a new take on our two favourite x-men. I kind of like angry defiant teen Rogue. And stories where it pisses off/turns on Logan to see her that way. I hope you have more written for this one. I also have one criticism for you,and it might just be related to the way your story uploaded, I know that happens sometimes, but your formatting makes it really difficult to read your story. Try spacing out your paragraphs a little better so the words are not all squished together. Good luck!

Author's Response: yeah, i have more written but Havn't had a chance to upload it yet. as for your critism, I tried to upload it from a word doc and it was spazing, so I ended up just copying and pasting...so yeah, next chapter should be formated better