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Reviewer: InkNPaperDoll488 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2012 5:52:39 AM Title: Chapter 3

I KNOW WHERE THIS CAME FROM!!!^_^ I helped to write that list!! Aaaahhhhhhh *jumps up and down with glee* I used to do a ton of Rping online when I was younger{only 24 now} but I mainly played Rogue. {This was back when everyone rped in chat rooms on aol} but there was this friend I had that would always join me as Jubilee, and on her profile page she had this list of like, maybe not even ten items, and I just started throwing out other stuff one day, and we kept adding, going from 25, then to 50. I said, let's just make it 100. We nearly died laughing from coming up with all of those. I can't believe it's still around. I am so glad you posted it here, because once I lost aol {that mess was expensive at the time} I lost contact with her, and all those funny, crazy convos wehad making that list. I was especially fond of 51, 52, 77, 87, and 100, because we both knew we were going to hell for making so much fun out of the Marvel characters we loved so much.

Reviewer: lily5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2011 8:17:49 AM Title: rage and lust

"She held out a hand and in a cool voice said “You owe meh five hundred dollars for the services ah rendered to you last week.”"

That was brilliant!

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2011 12:49:07 AM Title: rage and lust

muahaa. The ending was hilarious! Great idea to piss off Logan.

Reviewer: dulcesweet Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2011 5:56:15 PM Title: rage and lust

awesome chapter, more please!! this is a great fic, I even love Logan's denial. hope to read more soon!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2011 5:33:41 PM Title: rage and lust

Way to go Rogue! I love how she is fighting back! This fic is definitely interesting. More please!

Reviewer: RebelQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2010 11:03:04 PM Title: impulse

Ooooh, very nice! I hope to read another chapter soon.

Reviewer: Dita Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2010 4:52:26 PM Title: impulse

Hey,
I really liked your story, it's a bit of a new take on our two favourite x-men. I kind of like angry defiant teen Rogue. And stories where it pisses off/turns on Logan to see her that way. I hope you have more written for this one. I also have one criticism for you,and it might just be related to the way your story uploaded, I know that happens sometimes, but your formatting makes it really difficult to read your story. Try spacing out your paragraphs a little better so the words are not all squished together. Good luck!

Author's Response: yeah, i have more written but Havn't had a chance to upload it yet. as for your critism, I tried to upload it from a word doc and it was spazing, so I ended up just copying and pasting...so yeah, next chapter should be formated better

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