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Reviewer: skybound2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2011 10:51:23 PM Title: Chapter 7

*feeds the monster* I LOVE the way that you describe Rogue's break in the kitchen, and the awkwardness beforehand between her and Scott. They both feed into her blow at the Professor near the end perfectly. You can really FEEL her frustration with the situation, and the tension between them all is perfect. Awesome update!!

Author's Response: Oh thank you! I was just about to go to sleep when he came out looking for new reviews! Phew, that was a close one. I might have to start sacrificing people in between reviews & updates :O I'm really, really happy that you liked that scene - I was unsure about it. Expect more tension - I'll try to balance it out with some smexiness. Logan's long overdue for a shirtless scene...

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2011 4:45:20 PM Title: Chapter 7

Did I mention how much I DON'T like Jean? And Rogue with the attitude is a Rogue I like. Wolvie, do wake up.

Author's Response: Who DOES like Jean?No one here, that's for sure. I don't want a needlessly bitchy Jean in this, but I'm not going to be kind to her either. Trust me, Wolvie's awake....Marie? Not so much...

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2011 2:01:33 AM Title: Chapter 7

Oh, now that's just mean. Mean. With a cliffhanger like that, it's no soup, er, Hugh for you!

(pleasewritemoresoonthankyou)

Author's Response: I know. I'm a terrible person, but please, please don't withhold the Hugh! I'll start going through withdrawal symptoms. Honest to goodness tremors & tweaking. How can I write the rest of this story like that?

Reviewer: RoseSumner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2011 8:12:54 PM Title: Chapter 7

Alright, so I was prepared to tell you how much this chapter rocked, that it might be my third favorite (you just can't beat those first two, you just can't)chappie of all time. I was ready to present a list of all the reasons this was worth my happy-scream when I saw the update, provide the evidence of your awesomeness via easy-to-find-but-not-so-easy-to-choose quotes--until I reached the last line. No. No. NO. >stamps foot< Ar you kidding me? Are you kidding me?? You can't leave it there. You just can't. You can't. It's...it's illegal. See that sign Sahara? This is a no smexy cliffhanger zone..And I...I forbid you. Yeah, that's right. I. Forbid. You.

>crosses arms, stares down, lips wobbling faintly

Author's Response: *Tosses candy at you*. Hey! You! Fine, fine don't look my way. No, not even if I have a nearly nekkid Wolvie on a leash. Oh now you're interested? SYKE! That's what you get. Yeah, looks like we're going to descend into a passive-aggressive writer-reviewer situation....okay, okay really we can work this out. I promise - no, hear me out - I promise to make it up to you. Honest To Abs. Just - just stick around for a bit, okay? You know I've got some good scenes planned up ahead! Who's the one who bombards you with Abtastic pictures? That's right.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2011 7:53:31 PM Title: Chapter 7

Ack! Cliffhanger much? Was that a Carol-attack or a Wolvie-attack? Loved this chapter, especially the idea of l'il ol' Marie shooing Wolverine away from her. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Just a bit of a cliffhanger. More of a "stairhanger"? Har, har. Maybe it was a ninja attack? Wild packs of Peruvian dogs? Anything is possible! They are mine to play with! Muahaha...right. Ahem. Not to rub salt in the stairhanger wounds, but if you love the Rogan sass in this, then get amped for the next chapter! :D

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2011 4:40:09 PM Title: Chapter 7

hey hun, really loved the current chapter- it's nicely paced, i love the dialogue and i really want to know what's going on. like that you're taking time with your set up too. and i've said it before but i'll say it again: i love your version of professor xavier. hobbits away, hey!

Author's Response: *Bounces*. Yay, I'm glad you like the pacing. That's something that I'm constantly worried about (second to tense - I've kind of put that one to bed...with a little Benadryl help). You love my Xavier? *Bounces even more*, *tosses candy at you & hope I don't hit your eye*. I promise he will never delve into Evil!Xavier, but I'm more than willing to lay his humanity, faults & all on the table. Ye be warned.

Reviewer: Capt_Mackenzie Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2011 12:09:08 PM Title: Chapter 7

My bet is that's Wolvie tumbling her down the steps, not Carol. Although Jubesie might do it, too.

I loved her temper tantrum! It's about time she stands up for herself! Everything about that kitchen scene was a lot of fun.

Author's Response: Hmmm, we shall see. Maybe it's the Ghost of Christmas Past? No? You're not buying that theory? Not even a little? Okay, you're right, it's the Ghost of Christmas Future (Christmas to Come? Screw it - I hate that story). Yeah, MarieMuse has been itching for a tantrum. In fact, prepare yourself for more tantruming. Yes, I just made up a verb.

Reviewer: litlen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2011 10:20:05 AM Title: Chapter 7

Now see this is why I friggin’ hate chapter reading – I’m whizzing along, thoroughly enjoying an excellent read and it stops.
Nothing.
No more.
Finished.
The end a.k.a. to be continued.
If you didn’t write it so damn well it wouldn’t be too bad.
But you do.
So there we are.
I’m pissed.
You’re laughing.
I want more.
You’ve got it but are going to enjoy withholding it.
Is it still considered rude to swear at people these days?

Excellent chapter top marks all round – well done x

Author's Response: *Hangs head in shame*. I'm sorry. Really. I take no sick pleasure out of keeping you all on edge. There's no laughing. Honest To Abs, I'm excited that you guys are so into it. It's a boost of confidence that makes me want to get back to writing & say "screw you social work research! Do yourself!". I know it's torturous, but I promise good, growly things. Just bear with me. Maybe, just maybe I'll be extra nice with updates in the near spring break filled future.

Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2011 4:11:57 AM Title: Chapter 7

Poor monster-bitten one. *pets you* I loved her little chat with Scott, it worked so well I could just see them facing off in the kitchen. The idea of Carol just lurking waiting for her chance felt perfectly right for this scenario, and its interesting how you've given that a physical manifestation (the sugar low thing.) That's not something I've seen before. I also enjoyed Rogue throwing down with Xavier; I love seeing his eminence get taken down a peg or six. And "wall-of-Wolverine". I laughed, laughed some more and then started staring into space, pondering the possibilities ....

Author's Response: The Closet Review Monster seems to be appeased. I printed out & tossed it the reviews & so far, so good. It also wants me to sent up a shrine to Hugh Jackman's abs. I'm not going to question it. Phew, I'm glad you liked lurking-Carol in this. I wasn't sure how that would go over. The low sugar thing - interesting in a good way? When I thought of a personality wrestling for control over Rogue & her body, that's what came to me. It's an odd, but visceral sensation if you've ever had it (which I don't recommend trying out - passing out leads to ouchies). I'm double glad you're digging the Rogue-Prof interaction - expect more de-pegging in the future. Yes, I've already gotten my hiking boots out - I'm gonna be alllll over that wall-o-Wolvie.

Reviewer: Melancholy Rogue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2011 4:07:20 AM Title: Chapter 7

Well, I for one am very curious to see where this all goes. I really enjoy the story and hope you will continue it.

And, I wouldn't mind seeing a wall-o-Wolverine in my kitchen. lol

Author's Response: I'm curious to see where it goes too! I will definitely continue it - I couldn't leave this alone even if I tried. And I have (for the sake of school). Who wouldn't want a wall-o-Wolverine? You can call me Little Miss Mountaineer!

Reviewer: WitchBaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2011 3:14:58 AM Title: Chapter 7

dun, dun, DUNNNNN! wicked excited to see what happens next so please update soon! love the sassy rogue, she rocked in telling off the professor!

Author's Response: I *knew* I forgot something! Should have put "dun, dun DUNNN" at the end of that chapter. I'm glad you like my Sassy!Rogue. It's going to get her into trouble one of these days....

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