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Reviewer: Capt_Mackenzie Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2011 1:29:46 AM Title: Chapter 4

Lovin' the high drama in this one, and the first inklings of real communication b/w her & lOgan.

Author's Response: Usually high drama is no good for Logan & Marie, so I'm pleased that you don't hate it. Logan? Real communication? Don't let him hear you accuse him of that! Thanks for the rating & review! You made the first day of spring semester a little easier to stomach :D

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2011 8:55:55 PM Title: Chapter 4

Can't wait for more! :)

Author's Response: Stay tuned! I'm hoping to get the next chapter up this weekend!!

Reviewer: RebelQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2011 5:57:02 PM Title: Chapter 4

I am telling, this story always gets to me! Every time I read something new I end up tearing up with the emotion involved in Rogue's situation! I would love it if Jean was the first one to actually thaw out some towards Rogue, considering she did not Intend to kill Carol.

I can not wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Oh goodness, I apologize for the tears! I wish I could give you a plaid shirt to sop up your leaky eyes, even if it's still attached to a growly feral mutant. Uh, *especially* if it's still attached to a growly feral mutant. I can't promise any thawing on Jean's end. I'm mired in Jean issues - we're talking years of therapy, so I can't quite break her bitchitude. I will try to deliver more nearly nekkid Logan to compensate! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2011 8:34:30 AM Title: Chapter 4

This is a wonderful story. Especially descriptions of Marie's inner battles. And the hints of something being deeply wrong with the alpha team are great little innuendos.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're picking up the innuendos and that you like them.

Reviewer: litlen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2011 4:08:05 AM Title: Chapter 4

Great chapter, love the struggle within her mind, her battle to stay herself. You really are getting the balance right.

Love the subtle way you threw in Logan’s reaction at her wanting to wipe the slate clean. Just one line but enough as a reader to know there’s more to come between the two of them [dear god it’s innuendo time again, I have a dirty little mind, I really must work on that!]

There’s definitely concern from Logan in this chapter very well-disguised but there none the less – love the interaction between them [!] you really write it well. Looking forward to more, good job x

Author's Response: If I'm living off of reviews nowadays, then I can safely say this one is both delicious and filling. I won't be hungry for a while. I may have bounced a little while reading your thoughts, maybe made some embarrassing squee noises. "Balance" - I love that word, but I love that you think this story has it even more. Have I mentioned how grateful I am that you're on board for this little WIP ride? I am. I really, really am. :D

Reviewer: RoseSumner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2011 10:32:42 PM Title: Chapter 4

Ohhh....Myyyy.....Go--oddd!!!, Sahara! >rabid fan drooleyes roll back in head, twitches on the ground in a very, very good way<

"...wonders why she found her backbone now that she’s faced with a man who could, and probably would, remove it. Badass, hilarEEious, and poetic rolled into a spiked ball of talented awesomity. Other examples of such:


"She could live in there. Really. The damn thing is huge, which makes sense since she’s in a high-occupancy mansion."

Great, she’s going to hurl all over the mighty Wolverine. "

"She pulls away, noticing that she can only do so because he lets her."


The last lacked the hilarity but held the brilliance of the others. And I don't mean 'brilliance' as just really, really cool, but *genius*. Like Lawyer-Tom Cruise in A Few Good Men. Just a total pimp (forgive me, it was on as I was dressing for work this morning).

You have a divine knack for expressing common things in a completely fresh, "DAY-amn" kind of way. It's mindblowing. Wish I could favorite this story a hundred times. You're the best eggroll I've ever had.

Author's Response: This might sound creepy, but I'm very happy to be your eggroll. I hope you're okay with the fact that I'm a vegetarian eggroll though. If not, then I'd happily change if it means I get more awesome-sauce reviews like this. *Gobbles up your quotes. NOM NOM NOM*. You have no idea how happy that last little bit made me - the "completely fresh" bit. That's damn high praise. Muchas gracias.

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2011 9:38:10 PM Title: Chapter 4

Not sure where you're going with this, but I'm along for the ride. Plus "Homicidial Lumberjack"? I almost spit my drink on the moniter!

Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with this! I truly appreciate that and am very happy to make room for you on this Rogan train. Watch out for nearly nekkid Logans along the ride!

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2011 8:53:45 PM Title: Chapter 4

Nice. Tell me how that diet works out for you, sweetness. On the topic of this hot mess though, this was incredibly fun to read. She didn't come across as out of character for the situation. She was just a bit punch drunk as they say. Thank you. I'm really truly enjoying this. I loved the understated bit about being wiped clean and Logan's reaction to it. I also love all the mount Wolverine dirty things that Carol insinuated into her mind. I would totally have done that. It amuses me even as I feel bad for Rogue. I loves itttt. Precious. Sorry. Wrong field.

~Mia

Author's Response: Oh the diet is working splendidly. I had your review for breakfast & it was quite filling, let me tell you. I'm beyond happy to know that you didn't find Marie out of character. It's hard to pin down what she would be feeling in a situation like that, so I figured "hmm, why not feel them all?" Yes, I believe Carol is the representation of every WRFA-er's dirty, dirty mind. By the way, your "precious" moment made me grin like an idiot. Please feel free to indulge in your inner Gollum anytime :)

Reviewer: WitchBaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2011 8:40:09 PM Title: Chapter 4

i'll try to help with your diet, i love this story! i'm so curious to see what logan thinks of rogue now that he's seen what she goes through. but god, jean is such s biyatch! having another telepath run amok through rogue's mind isn't the best idea. please write more soon! i'm desperate!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for helping me with my diet. Your review is quite delicious. I completely agree with you about Jean, too. I admit that I have blatant Jean issues, but I don't want to make her a full on unmitigated bitch. Maybe Bitch-Lite?

Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2011 8:00:21 PM Title: Chapter 4

Hooray for a new chapter! Loved this one too. Too many truly awesome lines to quote them all, but I'll pick a few. For some reason, this struck me as really funny:

looking as close to calm as she’s seen him

Like Logan can never just *be* calm, he can just look close to calm.

Not to mention:
“Yeah.”
“Fuck.”
They were an eloquent pair.

I'm very interested to see how this develops. The Rogan stuff promises to be delicious, of course, but I'm also very curious about Logan's history with Carol. Keep posting!

Author's Response: You've caught on to my weakness - reviewers that quote! I love knowing what lines you guys liked. It's fun seeing which ones are universally enjoyed and which stood out to one person in particular. You're on to something about Logan and calmness. He's trying, but not quite there. This may be something I revisit. Thanks for reading, rating, & reviewing :)

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