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[Report This]Date: 01/12/2011 2:10:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
Your description of Logan from Marie’s pov – his actions, his clothes etc……an absolute joy to read! (as was pointed out to me when asked ‘what the hell are you reading that’s making you sit there with a stupid grin on your face?’)
Great chapter. Liking the prof, kinda hope he has no surprises and stays on the lighter side of dark. Logan? well Logan’s being Logan! am looking forward to Marie chinking his armour (which sounds rude but was really not meant to be !!) I know what I mean!! I like that she’s taken responsibility/blame for what’s happened, not bothering to fight her corner and it’s the prof that’s pointed out that it wasn’t down to her – hope that it will end up being Logan that rams that point home (and we’re sounding a little dirty again but i swear it’s not intentional!)
Thoroughly enjoying so far and really looking forward to the next instalment - Wolverine Mountain?....Yes please x
Author's Response: I don't know what your version of a stupid grin looks like, but I'm thrilled that I could put it on your face - even if other people now question your sanity. I can safely say that I will not delve into Dark!Professor territory. That's something that I have a hard time digesting, so I don't think I can write him that way. He has his faults, of course, but he won't be malicious in this. I'm glad you're liking Marie's personality so far. Balancing her guilt & sass is not the easiest thing, but it's got me questioning how much a person can take, what's a person's breaking point, etc. Hopefully whatever take I find will be entertaining/interesting. And please, feel free to lace your reviews with as many innuendos as possible - I enjoy every last one!
[Report This]Date: 01/11/2011 9:34:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow. This has the perfect level of detail to capture my interest. I love all of the internal and external conflict. Jubes can be the most awesome bitch around. Wolverine is so damn cranky. And Scott has a stiff stick in his ass. I really like this story. :D
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you're interested! I'll try to keep up the level of detail. I think Jubes would gladly wear the "most awesome bitch around" badge. And I'm happy that a cranky Wolverine didn't deflect your interest. Like I said, I'll try to keep up with the detail, especially when Logan decides to lose some clothing. I can't promise Scott will lose that stick though. I'm pretty sure he's one with his stick. Thanks for reading, rating, and reviewing. My 3 favorite Rs :D
Date: 01/11/2011 8:20:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
Everyone wants to camp out at Wolverine mountain. That's why we're here, love. To see if we can't exhaust that mutation of his or die trying.
Homicidal Lumberjack collection had me doubled over laughing. Don't know why that hit me as so funny, but I thought it was hilarious and very original. I likes it. Thank you.
~Mia
Author's Response: I know, I just wanted to get a head count, figure out the logistics & the like. Best way to test out that healing mutation though, right? Who needs the medlab?! I'm glad you liked the Homicidal Lumberjack collection. I'm thinking the Spring 2011 line will feature a lot less plaid & a lot more skin ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 01/11/2011 6:04:06 PM Title: Chapter 3
Another awesome chapter! I don't how you manage to be so witty without taking away from the emotionality of it. It's a really neat trick. :-) All the little details are awesome, like this: "Gingerly, she sits…and finds that it’s deceptively welcoming, like the man across from her." It really puts you inside Rogue's head in a very immediate way. Love it. My only complaint is that I want more chapters faster -- you should never have spilled that you had a bunch more written. It makes me antsy!
Author's Response: Thanks! I don't know where the balancing comes from either, it's a bit of a worry making sure that the tone is just right. I'm glad you're liking it so far! Sorry I spilled the beans about the chapters! I wanted to reassure you guys that I wasn't abandoning this WIP, but I'm super hesitant to post updates because of mistakes and my worries about pacing. Rest assured, those updates will come, though. In the meantime pack up what you need for the field trip to Wolverine Mountain. Awesomeness guaranteed.
Date: 01/11/2011 5:34:31 PM Title: Chapter 3
hey, sorry it took me so long to get to this. have to say i really like it, like your take on the professor too. and no, i don't hate logan, he's the sort gets bent out of shape about a team-mat being killed so i get his reaction. the only advice i can give is, watch your tenses please. you jump back and forwards between present and past and it's quite jarring to read. other than that this is great, and i look forward to more. hobbits away, hey!
Author's Response: Better late than never! And you're just in time for the field trip to Wolverine Mountain! Yes, my tenses are all sorts of messed up. I'm going through the rest that's written and trying to catch every change. They're very sneaky, those changing tenses. I have no idea what possessed me to just flip them around mid-chapter and why I didn't catch them all. "Catch'em, kill'em" is will be my new motto for the rest of the fic! Uh..the tenses..not the characters. No mass die-offs here.
[Report This]Date: 01/11/2011 5:18:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great story!
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 01/11/2011 4:47:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
I WANT TO HIKE MOUNT LOGAN!!!!
His Homicidal Lumberjack collection?! I had to stop reading. Laughed so hard my Netbook fell--you're really making me abuse this thing. And, "...just enough to show how often she made base camp at Belt Buckle Summit." ....I think it's very important that we take up mountain climbing. Very important. Very very very. There are just somethings you have to do before you die, you know? Can you give me directions to this range? Because it...it sounds like a good one, and its best to be referred, not safe to just jump on--I mean, into--into such a rigorous hobby. So where is Belt Buckle Summit? Where is it?!
Such wonderful prose in this. Alternately side-splitting and heartrending, without either one spoiling the other. Nothing over-stated, just right and cutting right through the readers expectations.
I love "...feeling like the shy child she never was..."
and, "the melody all too familiar even if the lyrics weren’t the same."
and, "EVERYHING ELSE". Your style is amazing. So, so talented. Wish I could rate this higher than a ten. Can't wait for the next chapter, and the next and the nextandthenextandthenextandthenext...
Author's Response: Who doesn't? That said, consider yourself signed up. I'll let you know when the bus leaves & I'll email you the itinerary. You may want to leave your netbook at home if just reading about Wolverine Mountain puts it in danger ;) I'm glad you found the humor & drama was balanced in this. Thank you thank you thank you. This review was a lovely read :D