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[Report This]Date: 12/29/2010 11:47:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG!!!
Freaking amazing, I was so disappointed when I got to the end.
Im loving your reluctant Logan and slightly crazy Marie :D
Cant wait for more!
Author's Response: Who doesn't love a slightly crazy Marie? I think I'm exorcising my crazy demons here. Oh & those Lusty Logan demons...wait...maybe I don't want to get rid of those ones...hmmm. I'll try serving up some more! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/29/2010 6:34:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh heck was this supposed to make me cry? I cried and even more so when Logan took pity on Rogue...
... and now I'm smiling because of the cigar/pacifier part.
more please!!!
Me like very much ^-^
Author's Response: Oh I didn't mean to make you cry! *hands you tissues, the nice soft kind with lotion*. OH, but you laughed too! Hopefully you read this in a nice secluded space where no one could ponder the craziness of those rapid mood changes. If you had an audience, then I hope the mental institution has an internet connection. Make sure you get placed in the ROGAN ward with the rest of us ;)
Date: 12/29/2010 6:18:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like this story, but be careful because you change tenses a few times in this story. I like the idea though and you do have some good lines :)
~Anji
Author's Response: Oh I know. I've been sitting on Chapter 1 for almost a month & the tenses were still bothering me. They were the main thing sticking in my craw. Uh, is it weird that I'm thinking about the tenses I'm using in my response? Yeah, tenses have seriously messed up my brain. It's something I'm keeping in mind & hopefully that problem will be fixed. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 12/29/2010 12:38:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
i LOVE THIS!!!!!! wOw, you've done such a good job at writing psych-ward!Marie ... heh, heh. And all the characters have their own voice, no matter how briefly they star in the scenes, each one is written distinctly & their personalities clearly recognizable.
I can't WAIT to find out what happens next!!!
Author's Response: All caps? Wow, thanks! I'm really glad that it's clear to readers that the characters are pretty distinct. Hopefully, I can keep that up without making them caricatures, y'know? But I'll keep chugging away at this if you keep tuning in!
Date: 12/29/2010 12:21:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm soooo in. I may not be the fastest beta or precisely regular, but I am one hell of a beta. I'd love to. If you still need one, that is. I can't tell you how fabulously happy I am that you are working on a multi chaptered affair. All sorts of inappropriate squeeing sounds were let loose upon hearing that. I love the premise of this story and the dangerous, protective against her version of Logan that you have going on here. I can't wait for more. Truly.
~Mia
P.S. prissiepup@hotmail.com if you are interested in having me as a beta. I'd do my best for you, babe.
Author's Response: Your squeeing sounds met my squeeing sounds at reading this. This was super encouraging. I'm going to post one more chapter - even though I've got about 8 typed up so far - so any interested betas can see if this is something they want to stick with. Thank you for this awesome review!
Date: 12/29/2010 12:02:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
I would be happy to beta. I really like the opening chapter btw. My email is alesiaglfyn@gmail.com
Author's Response: Golly gosh goodness, really? :) I might post one more chapter and if you think this story is still something you'd want to sit through then I'd be awfully grateful for your help :D
Date: 12/28/2010 10:47:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
great beginning, would love to read more
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm workin' on it!