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Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2011 1:11:11 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Epliogue

A very moving and intently dramatic piece. I loved every minute of it and couldn't help but wish for more. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing my work, I hope you enjoy the rest of my work on here, I can go down the darker path of Logan and Marie but there's always some hope and light in there somewhere, just like life it takes time to find but when it's found it shines all the brighter. Thanks again for reviewing hon.

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2011 12:03:11 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Epliogue

A very different view at Logan and Marie's life. It was a very enjoyable and moving story. Great work.

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2011 1:28:34 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Epliogue

I really enjoyed this! Again, I loved the Japanese/past/retribution angle. I've always enjoyed the Japanese samurai side of Logan. The parts with Marie and the wedding were very sweet. I also liked how you kept the Japanese theme in Logan's gifts and their wedding outfits--a really nice tie in to the rest of the story. Thank you for sharing this and hope you'll be posting another story soon.

Reviewer: litlen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2011 8:15:00 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Epliogue

See, I told you you’d prove me wrong, and the fact that Jean got put back in her place had nothing whatsoever to do with it :) well maybe just a little! Loved Rogue’s transition from ‘you’re far superior and I’m an unworthy little girl’ to ‘I know what the hell I’m talking about confident and mature adult.’ Only the slightest little bit of help from Katherine needed, I really do think everyone should have someone like her, she’d be welcome in my kitchen anytime! Nice added extra with the touching of Rogue’s hand.

‘Of small moments, opportunities and blessings that others pass by, the scent of fire on the breeze, the clang of iron being hammered into shape and the forging of a future that had steel at its heart.’ You just keep nailing the endings!

Thoroughly enjoyed the whole thing x

Reviewer: jenniferjwva Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2011 1:10:37 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Epliogue

Aww... (why is it everytime I read this story I want to start with "Aww"? lol)

I adore this story, so much. It's sad to see it end, but it ended beautifully.

Bravo to you! :)

Author's Response: Thank you hon, I think it needed just a little something extra to finish it off fully and it has it now. Glad you enjoyed the journey and hopefully you'll come back and read me again sometime. Hugs Jo xx

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