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*Clears throat*
Update? Pretty please?
Another awesome chapter! I can't wait for more. Keep up the great work!!
Ah, naked Logan. Perfect way to end any chapter, really ;). I'm curious to see how things will develop now that everyone's all . . . neighborly. Feels like things are starting to come together for Rogue--she didn't even have to speak through The Bard this chapter *gasp*. And, this really goes without saying, but Logan carrying her? Awwwwww. Can't wait to read more.
awww i like this story. :) it makes me happy.
Author's Response: I'm glad! That's my goal in life.
so happy to see an update. I love how you are developing everything. I also love how you are writing Logan. He is so protective of Marie already. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Happy dance!
Again, lovely chapter. I'm assuming Logan and Rogue's relationship will develop to become somewhat different than the relationships he has with Jubes and Kitty (at least I hope so...I love me some Rogan). :D Thanks for the new chapter- can't wait to read the next one!!!
Author's Response: No worries on that count. I love me some Rogan too but I always feel better about stories when they don't just fall into a romantic relationship. Especially with Marie being the way she is right now, there's no way she's ok enough to be anyone's girlfriend.
Wow, how'd I miss this new chapter???
Awwww, Wolverine in Rogue's head is so protective. Adorably protective, actually...*melts* I really like the dynamics between Logan, Kitty, Jubilee, and Rogue.
Not quite sure how I feel about Norbert yet...lol. I think I'm probably warped because I always have this fear of dolls being 'alive' or having a personality. Creepy! So in my mind, this Norbert personality is kind of a nightmare come true...I'm sure I'll get over it.
Anyway, love the story. Off to read the next chapter!!
This chapter as really cute. I really enjoyed it. I adore the relationship you have created with Logan and 'his' girls.
Author's Response: Thanks! I love what it's becoming as well!
Great work here, interesting how Norbert had taken on its own persona in Rogue's mind as a companion to her imposed captivity. Using Shakespeare to give Norbert a distinctive voice is quite frankly, wanderbar!
Love the interaction with Jubilee, Kitty and Logan. Fantastic story, I really love it! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I love Kitty, Jubes and Logan together, too. They make me smile.
A very compelling story. I hope to read more soon.
Author's Response: There's more coming hopefully over the weekend. Glad you're liking it!
Really interesting take.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you think so!
Awww Wolverine & Logan in her head are cute. I like Norbert, but it's good to see Rogue back in control of herself. Didn't seem convoluted or difficult to follow to me. Xavier's insights about blue fuzzy's origins were interesting . . . And kinda heartbreaking. Poor girl. I bet she's gonna take a liking to Beast. Would be a dream come true to find a big real life version of your imaginary friend who also has a tendency to quote the Bard :P
Author's Response: You want to know what's funny? I honestly didn't think about that until you just pointed it out... hmmm. Something to think about. I'm feeling better with Rogue back in control too. Thanks for the review.
Norbert's real! EEK!
More, please. :)
Author's Response: But he's not evi so it's ok, right?
I love this more with each chapter. Thank you.
~Mia
Author's Response: WRFA gremlins again?
I love this more with each chapter. Thank you.
~Mia
Author's Response: I love the you're loving it.
This story is so good. I sat down to start the first chapter, and ended up going straight through to the end of chapter 9, heh. I'm loving this slightly crazy Rogue, the wonder twins, Wolverine, Norbert. Really great character dynamics all around.
Jubilee's "Can we keep her?" Priceless. So many laugh-out-loud lines from her and Kitty.
Looking forward to the next chapter, for sure. I'm excited to see how Rogue's character develops, and I don't know if I'm reading too much into this, but Xavier turning to Logan for the decision about Rogue intrigued me. Does Xavier know something Logan doesn't know???
Everytime I see that you have updated this story its dance part time over here!!
Like Serafirm stated, you had me thinking with this chapter, and its so nice to put a personality to Norbit and of course, Im too am in love with crazy Marie and the ever more protective Logan....Please dont keep us waiting too long for another :)
Author's Response: I'll try not to! You might have a dance party when you see an update. I have one when I see a review. I sometimes feel a little bad because Marie is just so messed up in this, I feel like I'm tormenting her. But, I mist write what the muses dictate.
You had my brain working on this, LOL!
Your crazy Rogue is great - I love how thrown Logan is by her and his growing sense of protection. Xavier is going to have his work cut out for him for sure.
Author's Response: Working in a good way or in a bad one? I'm hoping the former. Glad you're liking her. I think she's pretty great too.
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Awesome.
Seriously, now I'm really fascinated to read the next chapter! My one piece of feedback would be a suggestion that you consider working on your "show, don't tell" techniques. But your ideas are very original and you do a pretty solid job with the characterizations. :)
Author's Response: Glad you're liking this. And thanks for your thoughts on my writing style. Could you explain the "show, don't tell" thing a little bit more for me than that? Maybe an example? I'm having issues trying to figure it out on my own but that might be because I know exactly what is going with every person at every moment in the story so things may seem clear to me when they aren't to everyone else. Help please! I am always striving to be a better writer. Maybe email me? haniccol@gmail.com Thank you so much!
Oh that can't be followed by anything good. They're really not thinking yet are they?
You're back! Yays! :D
Ooh, so I'm guessing Kurt, the fuzzy elf himself, has a space in her head, though I suppose it could also be Hank. Either way, good plot development in this chapter. Hope things go smoother for you from here on out.
Author's Response: Mmmmaaayyybbbeeeee. Or maybe not. Guess we'll have to wait and see. Thanks for reading!
Another great chapter. I have missed this fic! II could so see Jubes in that back seat! Hilarious! I can't wait to see what happens now that they are at Westchester.
Oh wow. Poor Marie. Great update, I look forward to how she fits in (or not) with the rest of the X-Mansion inhabitants! :)
I really am still loving this. I reread it tonight. I would love to see an update. (hint hint)
Author's Response: One is coming! Thank you for sticking by me. So much love to you!
Just letting you know that you still have people waiting on this story *bats eyelashes*
Hint hint :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know you were still waiting. I am doing everything I can to wrestle another chapter out of my brain again. Thanks for not giving up on me.