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Date: 08/14/2011 12:28:59 AM Title: Hell is empty and all the devils are here
Norbert's real! EEK!
More, please. :)
Author's Response: But he's not evi so it's ok, right?
Date: 08/11/2011 2:12:18 PM Title: Hell is empty and all the devils are here
I love this more with each chapter. Thank you.
~Mia
Author's Response: WRFA gremlins again?
Date: 08/11/2011 2:11:56 PM Title: Hell is empty and all the devils are here
I love this more with each chapter. Thank you.
~Mia
Author's Response: I love the you're loving it.
[Report This]Date: 08/07/2011 10:53:47 PM Title: Hell is empty and all the devils are here
This story is so good. I sat down to start the first chapter, and ended up going straight through to the end of chapter 9, heh. I'm loving this slightly crazy Rogue, the wonder twins, Wolverine, Norbert. Really great character dynamics all around.
Jubilee's "Can we keep her?" Priceless. So many laugh-out-loud lines from her and Kitty.
Looking forward to the next chapter, for sure. I'm excited to see how Rogue's character develops, and I don't know if I'm reading too much into this, but Xavier turning to Logan for the decision about Rogue intrigued me. Does Xavier know something Logan doesn't know???
Date: 08/06/2011 10:31:56 AM Title: Hell is empty and all the devils are here
You had my brain working on this, LOL!
Your crazy Rogue is great - I love how thrown Logan is by her and his growing sense of protection. Xavier is going to have his work cut out for him for sure.
Author's Response: Working in a good way or in a bad one? I'm hoping the former. Glad you're liking her. I think she's pretty great too.
[Report This]Date: 08/06/2011 2:57:20 AM Title: Hell is empty and all the devils are here
!!!
Awesome.
Seriously, now I'm really fascinated to read the next chapter! My one piece of feedback would be a suggestion that you consider working on your "show, don't tell" techniques. But your ideas are very original and you do a pretty solid job with the characterizations. :)
Author's Response: Glad you're liking this. And thanks for your thoughts on my writing style. Could you explain the "show, don't tell" thing a little bit more for me than that? Maybe an example? I'm having issues trying to figure it out on my own but that might be because I know exactly what is going with every person at every moment in the story so things may seem clear to me when they aren't to everyone else. Help please! I am always striving to be a better writer. Maybe email me? haniccol@gmail.com Thank you so much!