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[Report This]Date: 01/28/2011 11:47:06 PM Title: Having nothing, nothing can he lose
Nooo!! Don't be over!
I was getting into the flow of reading this story, and I was like "Wtf" when I couldn't find the button to go to the next chapter.
Please continue!
I've been enjoying it, especially the Shakespeare quotes thrown in.
Makes me feel happy when I can place some of the quotes on my own. Been meaning to read the tempest though... Haven't actually read Macbeth, but I saw the play a few times.
-- Wolf
Author's Response: The Scottish play is a good read and I enjoyed the Tempest as well but it isn't my favorite. I'm currently in the process of writing the next chapter and hope to have it out either today or tomorrow. I'm in the process of moving to Florida from Michigan, so it's been a little hectic around here lately. Thanks for letting me know you enjoy it! Every time someone says something about my story, good or bad, it makes my day.
[Report This]Date: 01/25/2011 4:42:07 PM Title: Having nothing, nothing can he lose
I've read and reread this chapter after flying through the first four - your writing is quite dense in this one, and what with the crazy ... it can be a bit hard to understand what's going on. That's not actually a criticism - Marie is a complex, fascinating character, and she deserves a bit of extra time and attention (from the reader) to try and figure out what the HELL she is up to.
As a long-time Rogan reader, there is NOTHING I love more than finding a setup I haven't read before, and I'm pretty sure crazywoman-in-the-attic Marie is unique. She's a fascinating character and its going to be a very interesting ride to see Logan move past his grudging interest and build something with her. (If that's what you have in mind). Please don't rush it, though ... this story is magnificent and deserves time and space to let the characters you have created develop and grow naturally.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to review. I did struggle a little in this chapter because I felt like she had so much to say, but I didn't want to lose anyone when they were reading. I'm glad that how dense it was didn't make you give up part way. Hopefully the rest of the chapters won't be quite so bad. Please let me know if anything ever doesn't make sense or is to convoluted because sometimes things make sense to me and other people are like WTF? Anyway, I have no plans to rush this because there is so much to this story in my head that I don't even know what to do with it half the time. rnrnThanks for letting me know what you think! Reviews are my bread and butter!
[Report This]Date: 01/23/2011 12:07:48 PM Title: Having nothing, nothing can he lose
I really enjoyed this. REally. And the Shakespeare quotes were more apt this time; a better fit, and therefore funnier.
The reveal of the two parties' respective mutant status was everything I could have hoped for, and you accomplished it with less drama than I expected. (I thought Marie's claws would create a crazed sort of moment on both her part & Logan's, but you did good underplaying it)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm gonna delve more into their respective mutations eventually but it just didn't seem quite right at this time. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 01/22/2011 8:59:22 PM Title: Having nothing, nothing can he lose
This is just the most brilliant bit of fuckawesome to ever have been penned in the fandom world. I'm kind of obsessed with it. A lot. I love that Marie is crazy. I love it a lot. It makes me feel free, reading your work. I adore the Shakespeareanese. So very far from Algebra on stage. Update soon, will ya? It's been long enough that I don't remember what complements I've already used in a review and you deserve something fresh.
~Mia
Author's Response: You are beyond awesome for reading and reviewing. Hopefully updates won't be this spread out I had to get things back together because I just got back from Florida. I'm moving now though, so I'm not gonna promises but know that I'm trying.
Date: 01/22/2011 7:44:49 PM Title: Having nothing, nothing can he lose
i feel special, thanks! The first bit of Rogue waking up in a daze totally reminded me of this youtube video. It's called 'unicorn after wisdom teeth'. Awww a new Rogue. ::sniff sniff:: all grown up. :)