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Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2011 6:04:11 PM Title: Chapter 15

Not ridiculous! Lots of drama without going over the melodrama cliff ... beautifully pitched in fact. I love that Keltie has seen the Logan and Rogue show in action, and that I'm confident she'll be using that to help cut through the bs! (Please, lovely author?)

Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2011 10:08:44 PM Title: Chapter 15

That was intense. In a very good way.

Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2011 6:03:03 PM Title: Chapter 15

Wow.

A lot has happened! That was quite a ride - from meeting Keltie and her dad, to the pool and almost dying, and then Ororo getting angry...WHEW!

What a great job, you are really good, especially considering how you are getting this story across through the use of letters. Now I can hardly wait for Rogue's reaction to all of this! :)

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2011 1:27:01 PM Title: Chapter 15

Whoop! I was ecstatic to see that you'd updated; I love this story. It's great that Keltie and Rogue finally get to meet, and I was on the edge of my seat reading about the pool incident. I don't suppose there's a future for John and Keltie?? Loved how she and her sister saved the day. Well, I should get back to work. Sigh. Congratulations on graduating and the fancy new grownup job! But remember, don't let that keep you from the important things: updating this story!!! :)

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