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Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2011 9:53:29 PM Title: Chapter 14

I LOVE this story so much. I really do! :) I especially love Rogue's interactions with Logan, and also, the various associations that write to her. Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2011 1:39:57 PM Title: Chapter 14

Stars from me too.

So many things I like about this story - the Japanese speaking? BRILLIANT. Following the example of not looking in Logan's eyes? DOUBLE BRILLIANT. I just love your story!! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I love knowing what's working, so this was really helpful. I'm so glad you like it! :)

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2011 1:08:42 AM Title: Chapter 14

I'm so humiliated right now that it actually painful to write out what happened, but I'm going to, if only so that the next time I consider putting bourbon (or vodka, or rum) to my lips, you can shake this in front of my face and remind me that bourbon (or vodka, or rum) is the DEVIL'S BEVERAGE.

I LOL'd. ;)

My love for this story just keeps growing. You have, as Jaq said, so nailed teenaged angst. (Aaaand there's a "nailed" joke in there but it's just not coming Oh, well.) How on earth are you going to get our heroine out of her fix?? Inquiring minds want to know!

Author's Response: That is so wonderful to hear! I have my plan to get her out, and hopefully it doesn't come off as totally ridiculous, but we will see! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2011 6:52:31 PM Title: Chapter 14

My heart is just aching for her right now. Poor wee baby. I think one of the things I am loving most about this story generally is how you have nailed that teenage angst; the need to do something, to take that risk, the crippling sense of inertia and things being beyond your control ... it's very insightful. Now hurry up and come up with a cure for the Legacy virus :D

Author's Response: That is a wonderful compliment and exactly what I was aiming for. If you get the chance to read anything by Jaclyn Moriarty, she is the one that has the angst down--every time I read one of her books I wonder if she went back in time and read my mind while I was a teen. Thanks so much for this review, it really made my day :)

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