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Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2011 5:49:07 PM Title: Chapter 13

Yes, I enjoyed this chapter very much. Another reader has already commented on the wonderful introspection from Rogue. Epistolary (letter) stories really lend themselves to that. I'm looking forward very much to the next installment.

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2011 9:53:53 PM Title: Chapter 13

Ali, this is good, good stuff! There's an authenticity here that makes me really care about the characters, and the ways that they interact, understand and misunderstand each other avoids ever feeling contrived. Keep up the good writing and the posting!

Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2011 1:57:26 PM Title: Chapter 13

Well.

First off, the introspection was phenomenal. Really. One of the best inner dialogues that I have ever come across for Marie. It read so easily, with superb flow, I was completely pulled into your story. And, at risk of sounding repetitive, I think your story ranks right up with the best of them. I am so happy that this chapter has paved the way for more because I cannot WAIT to read what happens in that bar!

Good throw in about Quebec!!!! :)

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