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Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2011 1:51:26 AM Title: Chapter 12

Hehe, this was magical:

>>They exchanged some words and Bobby said some things about John's mom and implied that I was a slut (only because it was Bobby, it was a lot more along the lines of "You are a moderately promiscuous female, who on occasion stands on street corners.")

Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2011 1:43:00 PM Title: Chapter 12

Fantastically written, as always. I don't know how you do it, but each of the characters in this chapter just jumped out at me, making me really care for them. This is such a wonderful story, and your wrting is superb. :)

Author's Response: Wow, that is such a compliment! Thank you. I know a care about them a lot but it is nice to see that they come out that way on the page. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2011 10:40:08 AM Title: Chapter 12

Another great installment! What a lovely mix of light angst and irreverence, humor and wit! I have to say, I wish Keltie lived next door to me when I was in high school. What a crack-up :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! That's basically what I was going for so it's nice to know it worked :) I try to make Keltie a mixture of the people I knew in high school and the people I wish I knew in high school. Thanks for reviewing!

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