Wow. That was.... pretty horrific, even a little stomach-churning at times, but a very compelling read. The oddly broken chapters confused me, but the story itself is really, really well-written. I look forward to seeing where you go with this.

Author's Response: Thank you for pointing that out. I've gone back and fixed a lot of the formatting that was lost when I pasted over the chapter... I hope that's what you were referring to :( But, I'm glad to hear that I've got you interested. :)