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Date: 11/08/2011 6:52:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
Yeah, that formatting makes for a much easier read. Also since I was reading it on my phone, the paragraphs really ran together. Still, great story. The situation's so realistic, and the character development is perfect.
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2011 9:09:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow. That was.... pretty horrific, even a little stomach-churning at times, but a very compelling read. The oddly broken chapters confused me, but the story itself is really, really well-written. I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
Author's Response: Thank you for pointing that out. I've gone back and fixed a lot of the formatting that was lost when I pasted over the chapter... I hope that's what you were referring to :( But, I'm glad to hear that I've got you interested. :)
Date: 12/08/2010 2:30:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
So many questions...and me on pins and needles waiting for answers. The set-up has been quite good, but I wouldn't mind if in the next chapter you'd drop a few more details, like who, what, and why. I'm just sayin'... --Wendie
Author's Response: Thanks for the advice, I really appreciate it! :D I'll try to keep that in mind for the next part.
Date: 12/07/2010 7:38:13 AM Title: Prologue
Tiny nibble though this is...consider yourself encouraged. Write on! --Wendie
Author's Response: Woohoo! I'm working on the first chapter as fast as I can. :)