The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive
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Your story has some real potential and I can see the raw talent you have. But your issues with spelling, grammar and flow make it like reading code. Sometimes it is clear, at other times your intent must be sorted out to understand what you just read. You really, really need a beta. If you actually want one, I'd be interested. You have a lot of potential with this story.
Wow! Now that is not what I expected at all! This is so heartbreakingly intense! You are doing a wonderful job with this story! Update soon!!!
Author's Response: thanks and i will. im startn on the next chapter now. and thanks 4 the feed back.