Reviews For ~Slave 4 You~
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Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2010 4:39:14 AM Title: Chapter 3

I'm really really confused. This was a reallygood pretense, but it's quickly getting confusing and everyone is acting out of character.

Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2010 3:53:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hmmm... this is a new route ttake. i'm intrested in how it goes. I'll be reading now. *grin*

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2010 6:19:21 PM Title: Chapter 3

O_O

Holy shit. This is unlike anything I have read. I love it! Update!

Author's Response: awe thanks . im writn the next one now

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2010 7:18:14 PM Title: Chapter 3

Your story has some real potential and I can see the raw talent you have. But your issues with spelling, grammar and flow make it like reading code. Sometimes it is clear, at other times your intent must be sorted out to understand what you just read. You really, really need a beta. If you actually want one, I'd be interested. You have a lot of potential with this story.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2010 3:46:29 AM Title: Chapter 3

Wow! Now that is not what I expected at all! This is so heartbreakingly intense! You are doing a wonderful job with this story! Update soon!!!

Author's Response: thanks and i will. im startn on the next chapter now. and thanks 4 the feed back.

Reviewer: WitchBaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2010 1:34:49 AM Title: Chapter 3

very cool chapter, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2010 7:43:35 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow what a start to a story! Love it so far!

Author's Response: thanks for readn and the support! i shud b updatn soon.

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