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I love it! The ending is great, dont bash yourself! I like the reference to cage fighting. I just watched the first movie again, and when he was in that cage, I was in a puddle on the floor
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It like this short little one shot. And I especially like a happy ending on it.
Author's Response: Thanks very much! Glad tou enjoyed it :]
I got the Marie line... its a whole "looks can be deceiving" sort of thing, right? I liked this, yes the ending needs polishing, but it's a great premise..that we all have claws of one sort or another.
Author's Response: Yay! Glad someone got it ^^; Thanks very much for such a nice review!
Really like it!
Wouldn't mind a sequel someday ;)
Author's Response: Thanks very much!! Well It is ment to be a oneshot but if something drags me back to it I'll certainly add a sequel ;)
I thought the ending was fine the story idea was one that i've read before so a big well done on that. One small thing that did jump out and in huh! Thats a little wrong was when you implied that Marie was stupid but apart from that i fought it was a good story
Author's Response: Thanks very much for the review! I think people are picking this up differently than I intended. It was ment to be that at a first glance Marie isnt beautiful or a genius (which is the view I got from her portral in the films) but I think she is ANYTHING but stupid! Sorry about that= Bad writer ^^;rnGlad you enjoyed it!
I think the ending is great. And the idea of "claws" is just perfect.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! Im glad you enjoyed it :]
While I agree with you about the ending being less than perfect, I am still impressed with this story, particularly as a first effort. It's an original idea, that they all have claws of one kind or another and they all use them for different reasons. Nice.
This line was especially good: She used them to scratch at his heart to remind him that it did feel things.
However, this line might get you into trouble with a bunch of readers: Yeah, the kid at first glance didn't look like much, wasn't a great fighter and wasn't a great thinker either.
You might want to avoid calling your heroine an idiot, especially when all evidence in both the comic and movie universes points to the contrary.
All in all, however, I'd say you're off to a good start. I look forward to reading more of your work. --Wendie
Author's Response: Thanks very much!! I think people are picking this up differently than I intended. It was ment to be that at a first glance Marie isnt beautiful or a genius (which is the view I got from her portral in the films) but I think she is ANYTHING but stupid! Sorry about that= Bad writer ^^;rnIm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks again x