Reviews For The Stars
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Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2011 11:13:45 AM Title: The Stars

Very nice...cute little snapshot of life between friends.

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Date: 09/09/2010 11:23:22 PM Title: The Stars

aww. It was cute!

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2010 1:48:48 PM Title: The Stars

Awww... affection :-D I vaguely remember what that's like. xXx

Reviewer: annie77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2010 10:22:35 PM Title: The Stars

aw this very cute, it made me smile

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2010 3:50:51 PM Title: The Stars

This is pretty good. I liked it. Just a nice moment between friends. Your best line, in my opinion, is 'Let life take care of itself...We'll just ride it till it comes to that point of getting off.' Pretty poetic, especially for Logan.

Second best line: 'No, you can't remember your life...I can remember mine AND yours...' Sometimes I forget that she has a bunch of his memories still in her head.

One bit of technical advice. When you change speakers, start a new paragraph. It makes it easier to follow who is saying what. Other than that, great job! --Wendie

Author's Response: Thank you! :) and ok i'll remember that one... it's might help in future cases.

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