The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive
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This is pretty good. I liked it. Just a nice moment between friends. Your best line, in my opinion, is 'Let life take care of itself...We'll just ride it till it comes to that point of getting off.' Pretty poetic, especially for Logan.
Second best line: 'No, you can't remember your life...I can remember mine AND yours...' Sometimes I forget that she has a bunch of his memories still in her head.
One bit of technical advice. When you change speakers, start a new paragraph. It makes it easier to follow who is saying what. Other than that, great job! --Wendie
Author's Response: Thank you! :) and ok i'll remember that one... it's might help in future cases.