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Reviewer: doctorg Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2011 1:44:54 PM Title: Heaven Knows I'm Miserable Now

Didn't even have to think about this one, I think it's the best line in the whole fic:
Didn’t help that the moment she’d spoken he and Parker had leapt apart with the limberness of spring lambs,
What a visual!

Reviewer: doctorg Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2011 1:44:00 PM Title: I Don't Feel Like Dancing

Okay, pretty much everything Jubilee says here is awesome, but especially this:
“So let me get this straight,” Jubes was saying, “You tried to warn Marie that Remy LeBeau is a no-good, honour-free horn-dog? And yet you somehow managed to turn that into You are Unattractive and Too Emotionally Frail To Deal With Adult Life? That about cover it, bub?”

and this:
“We must move beyond the Era of Logan the Growler, of Logan the Semi- Stalker,” She thundered. “We must even move beyond the Era of Logan, the Scruffy Sex God Who May or May Not Turn Up If You and He Make A Date! We must move ourselves into the Era of Logan, the Considerate. Of Logan, the Coordinated. Of Logan, The Only Man Marie Wants To Date. In short, we must move into the Era of Logan The Dancer!

Reviewer: doctorg Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2011 1:42:08 PM Title: Tainted Love

This caused me to snort water out my nose: It was strange, but he looked like the type of man who laughed easily and often, a far cry from the Wolverine and his death-and-me-are-Molson-buddies stoicism.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2011 1:40:58 PM Title: Don't You Want Me Baby?

You definitely bring the yum with this line: Heat radiating through his skin with every point of contact, the urge to shut her up using only his mouth and tongue and tonsils suddenly over-powering in that hot, sticky room.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2011 1:39:05 PM Title: Doncha Wish Your Boyfriend Was Hot Like Me?

I changed my mind like three times, but I think I ended up with this as my favorite line: And he waggled his eyebrows at Rogue, pretending not to notice that his friend’s claws were now shivering underneath his skin.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2011 1:36:30 PM Title: Are You Lonesome Tonight?

Too long to quote, but I liked how you described all the mansion sounds in this one. They all made such sense, it really made the place three-dimensional for me.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2011 1:34:26 PM Title: Ring! Ring! Ring!

All right, I will admit that I knew I was going to like this story, and so I waited until it was complete so I didn't get all frustrated with waiting for updates. I read the whole thing on my phone last night while I was traveling, but I know it sucks not to get chapter reviews, so I'll post my favorite line from each chapter. Thanks for writing -- this one was a whole lot of fun. It's amazing how well you handle action, comedy, suspense, smut. You are truly great at all genres of fic! And I loved the addition of Peter Parker to this crew.

Anyway, this was a great little touch in this chapter: But Jubilee was busy giving a dramatic pause, the kind Marie recognised from countless high school dishing sessions.

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2011 8:54:59 PM Title: Epilogue: (I've Had) The Time of My Life

I tried to post a review back when you finished this but for some reason I kept getting error messages. So now I've finally circled back to try again.

This story, just like all your stories, took me on a fantastic ride! I hate to see this one end because it was so much fun and had me laughing out loud countless times. And I love how you write Logan and Marie - so sweet and sexy and just plain RIGHT together! Plus, you are somehow able to pull in other characters from the Marvel universe and make it all work so damn well. You make it impossible to resist reading your stories because they are such a blast! I say resist, because I keep finding myself putting off things I should be doing in order to read your latest posts.

So thank you for finishing this story and sharing it with us. And as long as you keep writing them, I'll definitely keep reading them!

Author's Response: i'm catching up on my thank yous, and i certainly owe you one for all your reviews and always being so encouraging. thanks for everything love, i'm glad you like when i play with the marvel universe. rncheers!

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2011 6:41:26 PM Title: Epilogue: (I've Had) The Time of My Life

aww i love a happy ending xXx

Author's Response: cheers, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: litlen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2011 2:40:21 PM Title: Epilogue: (I've Had) The Time of My Life

Stands up.....applauds.....bows to your skills.....applauds a bit more.....sits back down to tell you......f’ing brilliant!

“Then kiss, cuddle, and get the fuck outta Dodge cos Ah think this is about to turn ugly, darlin’-”
“This place fish-filled barrel, you massive, well-proportioned fishing pole. Now score grass-hopper, score!”



I seriously could have picked so many lines from this - apologies in my slackness as I appear to have missed a chapter (and I was doing so well, I have reprimanded myself to save you the bother!) This fic was so funny, you really do have a great sense of humour and more to the point you write it so damn well. I have thoroughly enjoyed everything about this fic including the chapter titles which are not always given a second thought.


Our dear Hobbit gets 10 out of 10 again, very well done x

Author's Response: you know hun, i love hearing from you; your reviews always brighten up my day. and it's great to get some feedback on the chapter titles, which is one of the things i always agonise over when i write (i find the chapter won't flow until it has a name. weird, huh?. so cheers, rnla hobbituese

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2011 10:47:14 AM Title: Epilogue: (I've Had) The Time of My Life

And it doesn't get any better than this perfect ending to this outrageously awesome story. Congratulations on another masterpiece of MARVEL-ous fun! --Wendie

Author's Response: cheers wendy, i meant to say thanks for all you support before but i kept putting it off. glad you enjoyed and looking forward to hearing from you again (hint, hint, wink, wink- you know what story i mean). thanks again, D

Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2011 9:18:16 AM Title: Epilogue: (I've Had) The Time of My Life

Do you know what synchronicity is, dear Hobbit? It's finding this story again, and deciding to reread it from the start, the very day you post the final chapter. It was fated, I tell you. Because something this funny and romantic deserves to be slurped up like a whole tub of icecream - just delicious. From a writerly pov, I have to say, not only are you very, very funny, you also use your funny really well; some of this could have been schmalzty if you had leavened it perfectly with the humour, and the great dialogue, and the wonderful narrator voice. (The line about the garage of love ... and lo ... it killed me. Killed me, I tell you!) Sixty five stars.

Author's Response: hey hun, just wanted to say thanks for your review. i always look forward to hearing from you, (thanks for all the "Stray," reviews, BTW) and i'm glad you enjoyed "jitters." it's lovely to hear that you thought it was funny, because that was the one thing i was nervous about; writing funny (as you point out above) doesn't always turn out well, and it took a lot of time to do it here. But if you enjoyed then it's all worth while. so thanks again for the reviews and hobbits away, hey!

Reviewer: serafim Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2011 4:46:05 PM Title: Epilogue: (I've Had) The Time of My Life

There are so many things I love about your writing, but this one really got me good with how you brought in all the other characters. Poor Thor, lol, and I love the throw in about "meow-meow"!

Thanks again for this wonderful story. Loved it. Loved it. LOVED IT. :)

Author's Response: and i loved hearing from you! cheers!

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2011 9:03:36 AM Title: Epilogue: (I've Had) The Time of My Life

Awww... ;-) Thanks!

Author's Response: no probs love, just glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2011 4:07:42 PM Title: Epilogue: (I've Had) The Time of My Life

love it, Love it, Love it!!!!! Perfect ending!!!!

Author's Response: ah, there's only one way this story can end, and it involves hairy, happy ferals and buckets of luuurve... glad you enjoyed it and cheers

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2011 11:14:11 AM Title: Epilogue: (I've Had) The Time of My Life

Great story. Keep the great ideas and stories coming.

Author's Response: thanks for the review! i shall endeavour to keep the stories coming ;-)

Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2011 1:51:32 AM Title: All The Single Ladies

Omigod, this was just simply - the BEST!

I was laughing so hard, I could so envision the entire scene in all its chaos - Thor, Ironman - the impromptu crash of the amorous couple - Logan and Rogue tearing intot them....honestly - I LOVE IT. What an amazing story - BRAVO, BRAVO!!!

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2011 12:43:51 AM Title: All The Single Ladies

Oh mess. I've sorely been neglecting all things Rogan, including your lovely fic! I'm so sorry. While I grovel, let me point out some things I loved:

"Death By Bromance" :)

"...just as she heard Logan join Marie in the fight with a delighted shout of “Whatever you bite you keep!” :D

Your fics never fail to put me in a delightful mood. You always write scenes that I would love to be smack dab in the middle of.

Kudos for the Chippendales reference for a certain Thunder God. Spot on!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2011 12:02:22 AM Title: All The Single Ladies

Love the story. I couldn't stop laughing.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2011 10:56:59 AM Title: All The Single Ladies

You never cease to amaze and surprise me. I should have guessed that some of the Avengers would show up, despite Pete and Kitty's best efforts to duck them, but I didn't. As ever, this is spectacular. Well worth the wait. --Wendie

Reviewer: Melancholy Rogue Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2011 9:53:50 PM Title: All The Single Ladies

Oh my goodness, did this ever have me laughing out loud! Hilarious! I loved, loved, loved every word of it!

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2011 9:43:59 PM Title: All The Single Ladies

Well, that was truly an X-Man wedding! I loved the kicking of Thor's butt, even if he was always a favorite.

Reviewer: litlen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2011 6:38:43 AM Title: Big, Bad Handsome Man

Nice to c Jubes not left out of the love fest / shag fest [special mention for the Scarlett-O’Hara super smooch line]
love that ending! bring forth the [sadly] last part.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2011 12:38:02 AM Title: Big, Bad Handsome Man

Somethin' tells me those walls they be a-tumblin' down and a pair of hot-monkey-sexin' mutants are gonna get stared at by the entire wedding party...or something a hundred times more wonderful that you have already got spinning around in that brilliant brain of yours.

Your writing is so natural as to seem effortless, which always makes me green. And once again I crown you the Absolute Queen of the Italicized Aside for All Enduring Time. Nobody does it better, darlin'. NOBODY.

I am so glad you gave these two their due. Can't wait to see how this winds up... --Wendie

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2011 10:31:09 PM Title: Big, Bad Handsome Man

ooooo nice. remy isnt a dick afterall!

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