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Two great phrases here: Something sixties and dreamy and honey-toned. and: Making eye contact the entire time, whispering soft, hot things that made her feel dizzy and wanted, that made her toes curl and her blood practically sing.
I missed this, how did I miss this? Apologies for lateness but I’m here now and damn glad I am x
Loved the outward confidence at the start followed by snippets of the underlying insecurity.
Nice touch with the dance :)
Loved this section and the understanding it portrayed:- “She wanted him- her Logan, her Wolverine- completely and not some phantom who wore his face. So she began whispering in his ear, telling him what she wanted him to do to her. Asking him to give himself to her completely, to let everything else go. With each delicious rise and sinful fall she felt him- the real him- come ever closer to the surface. Felt the man she’d dreamed about all this time put himself ever more fully into her hands”
And then we have the “I’ll want you til they bury me, darlin’, line and the ahhh factor hits an all time high! Manly romance - The wording used still keeping him Logan with undercurrents of Wolverine and not some sweet weak drip! I know what I mean it’s just hard to put into words!!
‘Officially Fucking Rocked’ – yep!
Actually, it's this story that officially fucking rocks!!! I love all the quotes that Moviemom, Lorelai and Melancholy Rogue referenced. They're all fantasic but I think the one that Melancholy Rogue mentioned is my favorite. This was such a sweet chapter and I loved it. I'm psyched that there is more to come.
I don't know how I missed this! I should have been as on top of this update as....
...well you know.
Ugh, can I outsource any writings of Smutty Goodness to you? Do you do freelance Smut Writing? Because you balanced the romance perfectly here, showing that you know your smexy writing.
Oh, the tricked-out sex cave ain't the only thing about this story that Officially Fucking ROCKS! You managed to balance the quick and dirty with the slow and sweet and then tossed in one of the sweetest moments I've ever read:
Logan came a moment later, her whispers that she loved him the first thing he heard on the other side of it. WOW. Just WOW.
If I haven't done it already, this is definitely going in the faves... --Wendie
I really love the line '“You go to heaven and I go to Hell and I’m staging a jailbreak to come looking for you.”' I think that's such a perfect way of saying that, is it a quote from something or is it yours? Either way it's wonderful, one of my fave quotes now! :)
“I love you, you get that right?” he said after a moment. And he gave her that smile he’d given her in the kitchen, the one she’d never seen him throw to anyone else.
Turns out, that one was hers.
Okay, I loved the whole thing, but that little section right there was my favorite. :) Great job!