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Date: 07/04/2011 1:54:00 PM Title: True
Mmmmm: Despite herself Marie felt heat rising to her cheeks, felt herself taking in every wet, dirty, scuffed, perfect inch of him.
[Report This]Date: 02/26/2011 11:10:10 PM Title: True
I'm on a reading/commenting ROLL tonight!!! Getting myself all caught up on all the LOVELY fiction available around here, and this one is just...ugh...SO well done.
I think (at least, I HOPE) I mentioned in my review to Back in Black, that I love how you write Kitty and Jubes, and all of the other 'side' characters. You give them a lot of life, and really make them pop on the page (or screen, or, whatever).
And I honestly ADORE your Remy in this story. Love that he was willing to get into a knock-down-drag-out fight with the Wolverine JUST to help Rogue out. (And OMG, the SEX GARAGE is a BRILLIANT IDEA!!! Holy, hell!!)
This last chappie was fantastic. The fact that Logan and Marie can go from that awkward practically NON-TALK at the Cathedral to the one here, where they actually establish what is between them BEFORE getting *ahem* the 'show on the road' (and yeah, SO looking forward to that!) is just fantastic.
Really great characterization with a fun plot. What's not to love here?
Date: 02/17/2011 7:46:47 PM Title: True
This might have been a bitch for you to write but it was pretty frickin' awesome to read! I loved how they were so tentative at first and then they finally got down to talking. It was cool to hear Logan just put it all out there.
So many geat lines in this (as always): "...porn did not count" LOL
"...choose the no good bastard who'd do anything fer you--Who is me, by the way!"
"Ah coulda taught a course on that at the Mansion, mainly because of you."
"...all the ingredients for a letter to Penthouse..."
And the best one: "Let's get this show on the fuckin'road."
Amen to that!
Oh, and lastly, I really do think that there is a picture of Logan in the dictionary under "Sex On A Stick".
[Report This]Date: 02/17/2011 6:33:11 AM Title: True
“We got played.” 1st thought in my head......Oh dear what a shame!!!
Loved the way they were treading on eggshells, neither knowing quite what to do, neither wanting to leap before the other.
‘see through the no good bastard who’d hurt you and finally choose the no good bastard who’d do anything fer you’ I loved this line [amongst others] really had the ahhh factor! Readers all over shouting at their screens ‘yeah Marie why didn’t you see’
“Let’s get this show on the fucking road.-” And he and Marie took it from there.......hereby voted as best ending to a chapter - you could finish the whole thing there and I’d be perfectly happy......
but then again ;)
Date: 02/16/2011 10:10:02 PM Title: True
Bouncing, bouncingbouncingbouncingbouncing
You know you could've ended it right there....
...if you were a terrible, awful, sadistic individual who wanted death threats.
Luckily for everyone you're the Smut Queen and you do deliver.
"And it was in that moment that Marie decided being locked in a tricked-out sex cave with Logan officially fucking rocked." Well said!!!!
[Report This]Date: 02/16/2011 8:06:22 PM Title: True
The beautiful thing about your stories, and those of another chosen few on this site, is that you always let Logan and Marie 'take it from here'. You get out of the way and let them talk and do and whatever else. It's their story and you let them tell it.
I love that they talked first and really opened their hearts for a change. That makes what comes next all the more wonderful.
And if you have any pull with these two whatsoever with regard to storytelling (see first paragraph of review), then I would be ever so grateful if you could perhaps coax both the slow-and-sweet AND the quick-and-dirty smexiness out of them. But if I have to settle for just one, I definitely vote for the slow-and-sweet 'cause I like the sound of 'all night long'... --Wendie
Date: 02/16/2011 7:38:14 PM Title: True
First- thanks for the welcome back. :)
Second- You had me cracking up with the "tricked-out sex cave" and "lay back and think of Westchester" lines. Hilarious!
This story is amazing. I'm so happy that they're finally laying it on the line and telling each other how they feel. So good!