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Date: 12/02/2011 6:53:16 PM Title: I Play Chicken With The Train
I wonder if Remy survives Jubes' plan.
Date: 07/04/2011 1:51:44 PM Title: I Play Chicken With The Train
This was a very deep thought for Remy in the middle of a fluffy chapter. It's great: Girl spent so much time trying to distract the feral from his darkness that she never thought to find someone to distract her from her own.
[Report This]Date: 02/01/2011 4:27:06 PM Title: I Play Chicken With The Train
Chapter 1 - Great humour throughout. Fantastic dialogue between the girls. Loved Marie’s unconvincing denial of her feelings for Logan. Pete Parker? We’re crossing again! Bff? Had to look it up - I’m way too old to keep up with all these abbreviations!
Chapter 2 – f’ing brilliant. love, love, love this chapter!
Chapter 3 – great title! “And you are..?”......“Armed.” Fell of the chair with this line!
Chapter 4 – Logan stumbling and getting it all wrong, far too amusing!! an absolute joy to read – you really are so, so good with the humour x
Chapter 5 – 'Her Hello Kitty panties’ way to throw a bucket of water on the fire, loved this ending to the list. ‘couldn’t give a rat’s testicles let alone its ass’ an oldie but still a damn goodie! Loved Marie’s angry internal rant and then the switch to flirting.
Chapter 6 - along with great humour we have great visuals. I can see everyone, their expressions and actions – loved my picture of kitty smacking Logan round the head!
“And no, just grabbing her and trying to have your way with her on that bar doesn’t count.”..... “I’d find it fucking encouraging, darlin’,” – me to but that’s beside the point.....
‘and you can do a dancing Obi-Wan on Logan' – see it’s all these little but constant extras that make this so damn amusing to read.
Chapter 7 – again with the visuals – Logans Ass swaying on the dancefloor.....not bad at all, very nice infact!
Chapter 8 – who knew I’d be so interested in reading about someone washing up – that’s talent right there!!
Chapter 9 – poor ol Logan, you really know how to make him put his foot in it!
Chapter 10 – now we got both of them at it, hope the misunderstandings don’t go on for too long - I don’t think my need for shippery goodness can take much more!!
Chapter 11 – bollocks! Knew it was a wip but really didn’t want to get to the end!! What happens next? Is the plotting & scheming going to work this time? Will they finally pull their heads from their arse’s? Suspense kills you know, and I’m too young to die.
You deserve a more in-depth review for each chapter but I just couldn’t stop for long, it was so good I had to keep reading! well done x
Date: 01/20/2011 4:02:03 PM Title: I Play Chicken With The Train
I don't care whose head you are in when you write, it always, always, always sounds just like them and no one else. Logan is Logan, Remy is Remy...you get the gist. I love that Remy is willing to 'take one for the team', as it were, in cleaning up his own mess. Of course, I think Jubes 'thank you' might include a whole lot more than a handshake when all is said and done, n'est pas? This one was extra lovable, which means I'm really looking forward to more, more, more!
Oh, and just so you know, I haven't read and reviewed those last three chapters of B in B because I haven't had sufficient 'alone' time to really relish them the way I want to. Normally, I'd do it when the kids go to bed, but lately I've been crashing right along with them. But, believe me, it's at the top of my 'to read and review' list! --Wendie
Date: 01/20/2011 9:40:36 AM Title: I Play Chicken With The Train
Ermm... Remiane? Remienne? Remiramis? Oh no, I see: LaBeau. Oh dear.
Great to see the girls work together, absolutely agree with other reviewers that Yukio is great!
And love the interaction between the two guys, sounds very credible to me. thanks, HobbitsDIB!
Date: 01/20/2011 9:13:23 AM Title: I Play Chicken With The Train
Remy dug his grave, now he gets to lay in it. I'm glad to see more of this story because it always makes me smile. Thanks for doing all you do to make my life happier!
Date: 01/20/2011 6:01:53 AM Title: I Play Chicken With The Train
God I've missed this story! I'm not sure why you were having confidence issues, your writing is excellent and a joy to read. Again, love the humor in this story. The "they better name a kid after me" line cracked me up. I look forward to the ass kicking! Please update soon!
Date: 01/20/2011 12:31:04 AM Title: I Play Chicken With The Train
"a look on his face like a smacked ass."
OH. MY. GOODNESS.
I truly guffawed at that. That's right, I didn't just laugh, but I cracked the mess up. So for the record: your confidence crisis is has no business here. You started out of the gate with this hilariousness! C'mon!
"Paffinate"? Hmmm, I like it.
Love how you kept the whole "Armed" thing and you worked in the demon princess/goat sex thing.
You've successfully undone a three hour lecture on research methods. I can't thank you enough.
[Report This]Date: 01/19/2011 11:23:45 PM Title: I Play Chicken With The Train
I had almost forgotten about this story, but I loved being reminded of it! More soon please!
Date: 01/19/2011 9:28:40 PM Title: I Play Chicken With The Train
They better name one of their kids after me, made me howl with laughter. Even if it's a girl made me wake up my daughter from a dead sleep on accident. Damn but I have missed your sense of humour.
~Mia