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Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2011 6:44:03 PM Title: Heart of Glass

I love the 'misunderstandings' stories even though I often want to hit Logan and/or Marie while reading.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2011 1:50:06 PM Title: Heart of Glass

Awesome: “Look,” he said, “I ain’t Hank so I’ll leave out all the big words and just cut to the chase: What The Fuck, Marie?” And he swept a hand behind him, as if to encompass all that might be The Fuck.

Reviewer: haniccol Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2010 2:39:10 AM Title: Heart of Glass

I have no words...

I never thought I would see the day when someone would be able to write something that would make me want to hang Logan out a window and let little mutants use him for target practice. You just proved me wrong. God, please let Jubes magic work wonders.

On another note, great as always. I love how real everyone always feels and how little misunderstandings get blown up in your stories like they seem to tend to do in real life. Bravo. More please.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2010 12:42:57 AM Title: Heart of Glass

Because it was mighty fucking painful to realise that the woman of your dreams thought you were a complete and utter man-whore of a prick.

Good line. But Logan, You are a man-whore of a prick with everyone BUT Marie. But she can only judge on what you show her.

I feel bad for Logan but I understand why Marie thinks what she does. He has not shown any interest in her till now. She has seen for years how he treats women. What reason does she have to think she would be any different?

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2010 11:44:48 PM Title: Heart of Glass

Perfect. Frustrating with a capital F! but perfect just the same. The 'she spills her guts'/'he clams up' see-saw is gonna drive me flippin' bonkers before this fic is done, but you write it so well that it's worth a little trip to the nut hatch. Let's hope Jubes can pull both their heads out of their asses and set them on the road to Rogan goodness!

Reviewer: notmyself Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2010 8:45:36 PM Title: Heart of Glass

I found myself responding to some of your better lines. And I found the things that popped out of my head amusing so Imma share, k? Logan wished he had a handy tourist to skewer ...(I volunteer!) You never send a man to do a woman's job.. Not even the Wolverine. (Well, maybe Scooter. Or Icepop. But definitely not the Wolverine.)

This was much more fun to read. Thank you for clearing up the asshattedness. Or at least the reasoning behind it. That was heartbreakingly written. Really. That was some superior prose. Thankee kindly.

~Mia

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2010 7:54:43 PM Title: Heart of Glass

"And he swept a hand behind him, as if to encompass all that might be The Fuck" Haha, oh man I loved this line.

Thank you for reminding me of someplace so deliciously warm after walking around my town where it's so painfully cold.

I bet Marie's stomping through Bourbon Street would deter people from propositioning her too. That's damn common there. If you've got boobs & a heartbeat, then consider yourself employable at Big Daddy's World Famous Love Acts (that's actually a real place, honest to Logan's Abs).

I just wish I found a feral on Jackson Square :(

Glad you liked "Throwing Rocks"! Thanks for reading & updating. And if you would please make these two see sense I'd be much obliged.

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2010 7:43:42 PM Title: Heart of Glass

Contrary to your A/N, I don't want to deck you or Logan. But I DO want to give Logan a big hug! The poor guy, getting his heart stomped on after he tracked her down to work things out. I hope Jubes can work her magic and get those two thick headed people together! All I can say is I'd be happy to take Logan off Marie's hands and comfort the big lug if Jubes can't fix this. Hey, a girl can dream, right?!

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