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Beautiful, sweet and FUN story - savoured every last word! I loved remy/jubilee too - I've always preferred Logan/rogue and remy/jubilee to remy/rogue. (By the way, you should put this on archive of our own, because quite frankly it should be *everywhere* lol)
This is the FUNNIEST wedding/barroom brawl I've EVER seen! My God, I thought I never stop laughing, my aunt came into my room asking what the **** was so funny? I couldn't even stop laughing long enough to tell her! Awesome!
Beautiful, smutty, funny, this story is amazing. Could read it over and over and over again. So need more like this!
Author's Response: Hi, I know it's a bit belated but I wanted to say thanks for this review- I'm glad you enjoyed the story... Hobbits away, hey!
Aw. Thanks for a great story!
Author's Response: hey hun, just wanted to thank you for all the kind reviews! i normally only respond to reviews when i'm writing the fic (everyone gets a shout-out at the beginning of each new chapter)but you started me thinking that it was kinda rude not to say thanks if someone only discovers the story after it finishes and then reviews. so thank you, i'm really glad you enjoyed "jitters," and i'm really looking forward to your next chapter... rnhobbits away, hey!
I will ignore how you made Logan three and a half feet tall here! ;-) I know he can be short, but...
Best line: And without a moment’s hesitation the Asgardian reached down and smacked Kit soundly on the ass. Grinning. As if she kept her supply of drunken bridesmaids in there.
You can make even the most innocuous sentences so evocative and lovely!: He’d ghosted into place beside her, an unlit cigarette between his lips, the look he was throwing the newly-clued-in honeys unreadable.
Two great phrases here: Something sixties and dreamy and honey-toned. and: Making eye contact the entire time, whispering soft, hot things that made her feel dizzy and wanted, that made her toes curl and her blood practically sing.
This was a very deep thought for Remy in the middle of a fluffy chapter. It's great: Girl spent so much time trying to distract the feral from his darkness that she never thought to find someone to distract her from her own.
Did I mention the yum?: She launched herself at his throat, teeth breaking the surface and as she did so she heard him make a sound she couldn’t identify, somewhere between a snarl and a moan. Felt his big, heavy hand thread roughly through her hair to hold her mouth in place. “Right there,” he hissed as she bit again, “Right there, darlin’- Just like I like it-”