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Reviewer: JadeFeonix Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2011 7:03:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting. Very interesting, different concept I like kt :3

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2010 6:58:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

Im gunna cry. That song has gotten me through a lot since the first time I heard it. I play it for hours to make me feel a little more human and a little less alone.

I loved this story. It hit home for me.

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2010 4:49:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh, such a lovely melancholy piece of writing. I adore it.

I had several fav lines, but this stood out:

“Six weeks from now, you free?”

“I guess.”

“Go out with me.”


So very Logan.

This is such a gorgeous piece of writing and I echo the voice of others when I say I’d love to see more...

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2010 12:05:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

I agree wholeheartedly with Shuttlelauncher -- you can't end it here. You've got us on pins and needles about side effects and potentially deadly outcomes. Anything that can throw Logan into that much of a tizzy is no small matter and deserves exploring to the Nth degree. I also concur with your other two reviewers; this is sad and sweet, but does leave us with a hopeful feeling -- how could a soft, gentle kiss and a vow from Logan to be with her 'always' be anything but hopeful? Trouble is, you made us wonder if 'always' might not be a whole lot shorter for Marie than they want it to be. So, I say, there's at least one more chapter in this...please? --Wendie

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2010 11:41:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Lovely! Sad and melancholy, but with the just right glimmer of hope at the end.

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2010 11:20:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is sweet. Sad but sweet.

Reviewer: Shuttlelauncher Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2010 8:21:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

What's going to happen!? You can't leave it there...

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