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Now that the real Logan's finally in the story...it's over. Great job on an entertaing, gripping story, well-written and with excellent characterizations. Only wish it was completed. After all this time and the demands of real life, I suppose this never will be, though. Too bad.
I RARELY read unfinished pieces, but the title of this really piqued my curiosity, now my only complaint is WHEN WILL IT BE ADDED TO???
It's an amazing piece, so detailed with descriptions of the locations, people, thoughts, ideas and desires of the people, I was drawn in immediatley. I'm so glad I was able to come in and know he IS alive...now the question is, how will he and Rogue continue on, now that she's been proven correct?
I know it's been a while since you updated this story, but I just found it again and remembered how much I loved it. If you have even the tiniest urge to continue writing it, please listen! I'd love to read more of this (or any of your writing!)
Great updates! I hope you post more... and soon! And yay for the plot development in this chapter! I mean, Rogue went through so much effort to find the cabin, thank god Logan is there... sort of... in a creepy bushman way. But that's something! Why the heck didn't he contact the X-Men and Rogue!! Selfish... I hope she gives it to him! lol.
Squee! I read this all at once on my phone and promise to go back to review the earlier chapters, but for now I am so glad Logan and Marie are finally in a room together, even if he's crotchety. ;-) Great work! Keep it up!
I am so happy you updated (though not about your family's situation). Wonderful descriptions, little things like Stark's employees griping about being hungry add that much more vividness to your story. I really enjoy your Tony Stark and I really look forward to *hopefully* Logan returning. Your Rogue is so strong, just the way I like her! :)
YYEEEEEEAAAAAHHHHH! I am *thrilled* that you've updated. And I'm not feeling the rust at all. I liked the lack of an immediate recognition of the cabin and then a growing conviction once the better images were available. And I'm so glad they've found the cabin and Rogue's there... great transition to whatever comes next. And what does come next? I'm on on the edge of my seat! (I'm sorry to hear of your reason for the delay between postings, and hope that all is well with your family!)
I'm glad everything is going well for you again. I hope real life continues on that way.
I was so happy to see the return of this story. I can't wait to see what happens and I love the conversations Rogue has with the Logan in her head. I'm also super curious what will happen when they meet again and how the inner-Logan will deal with the outer-Logan being around.
Oh, gosh, I hope your dad is doing better now!
Nice to read a new chapter on this one. I like how you're taking us through as Rogue solves the mystery. The interactions between Tony and Marie are great, too.
I started reading this last night and then had to break - to go and watch Ironman, would you believe! Weird, completely unplanned coincidence. So came back to the last few chapters with a different feel for Tony Stark, poor, misunderstood baby. He's just hurting on the inside ... :) He can keep his greasy paws off Rogue, though! I'm loving the plottiness of this, and the depth of the Stark Industries crossover ... your Paul Morrow character is really nicely done, as is Stark himself. I'm wondering though, about Rogue ... I'm not getting much of a sense of her as her own person? I get what she is doing, and why, but I want to know more about her motivations and her grief and her fears ... loving your plottiness, but I'm greedy enough to want plottiness and thinkiness too!
Yipee! I'm thrilled you posted and thrilled with the chapter. I'm even thrilled with the cliffhanger. :) And I'll be even more thrilled when there's more.
I just gotta say, you consistently do a very good job of making personalities come across without actually talking about them. I feel like I get a really good sense of who the characters are and what's driving them, yet you never belabor the point.
And now, vorwaerts! (Onward!)
I love this story. Ridiculously so. And I know this wasn't your intention, but its even made me like the idea of Stark/Rogue. I've never really cared about Ironman, but your portrayal of him is ace and I started thinking, you know, if Logan WAS dead... (but I know he's not and therefore Rogue must end up with him!). :)