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[Report This]Date: 09/19/2010 7:52:55 PM Title: Chapter 9
Keep the Monopoly money and just feed us more words! :)
Author's Response: Deal. :-) :-) :-D
[Report This]Date: 09/09/2010 7:36:45 AM Title: Chapter 8
Like I said over on the other site, this is an amazingly awesome story. I just love how you write - your style is so easy, yet incredibly descriptive - some of your sentences bring actual tears to the eyes. God, I wish I could write like this!!
I love your Logan to bits - he's so manly and grrrr - but then Marie brings out his softer side so well and this is where you really excell. Their scenes together are nothing short of perfect.
Keep writing, 'cos I'm hooked!!
Author's Response: I didn't think I could be happier than after your last review. This has wonderfully proven me wrong. Thank you so much!!! >dancing<
[Report This]Date: 09/09/2010 6:56:46 AM Title: Chapter 8
More???? xXx
Author's Response: You bet. :~) Gracias!
Date: 09/09/2010 5:20:50 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh God. Please stop making me cry. The way he takes care of her is just...So very. I don't think I can find words. And i want tree chapters of her "father" suffering. Pwetty-pwetty- please. You know the law.
Author's Response: Uh-uh. Can't do it. The more you cry, the prouder I feel. But I'll see what I can do about the father. ;~) Thank you! You're so awesome!
[Report This]Date: 09/08/2010 8:56:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
Pwetty pwease post again soon! Hey, tit for tat as they say...loved the chapter and can't wait to read more. I wish she would trust him but I understand how she is suspicious of any kindness...
Author's Response: Thank you! I afraid of jinxing myself, but Im hoping to have le chapter up Sunday.
Date: 09/07/2010 9:20:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
So today was the most boringest, awfulest poppiest day at work/school & I decided to re-read Heal Over & this. And I realized that for what it's worth, in my book this stuff is in like Terri, & jjblazer territory - the O.G.s.
That's right I said it, there are Original Gangsters in W&R fanfic (gangsters with a hard 'r', mind you). And I'm keeping your stories in that general frame of mind.
I should stop bothering before you consider pressing charges for harassment or worse, not update...
Author's Response: My eyes popped and, because there are sleeping people in my house right now, I bit my fist to keep from screaming crazily at my computer--in a good way. Do know how hard it is to do a silent happy dance? Its like trying to tiptoe past Wolverine when the whole floor is carpeted with bubble wrap. Anyway--thank you. That's one of my most self-indulgent of daydreams, having someone say that to me. Im beyond ecstatic. ...And it's strange-I got my alert just as I fineshed picking out pictures for you.
Date: 09/07/2010 3:29:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
Just one word ( well 3 words) I love you.
You can't imagine how happy I am when I see that you have update your story.
You're a wonderful writer
Author's Response: Always wanted someone to say that because of my writing. I love you too. This is the best short review Ive ever gotten. Thanks.
Date: 09/07/2010 2:11:17 PM Title: Chapter 8
So here I am again, gushing over your amazing writing, wanting to sob because this chapter was so heartfelt. But I refuse to cry because, well, that would be ridiculous, right? Because they’re not even real people and I’m not still stood in the corner of Logan’s apartment watching that scene play out. Right?
“He picked the quilt off the floor, tucked her back in and listened to her beg him to stop something he hadn't begun.” – okay, I’m definitely going to cry. And my hubby is going to think I’ve lost my mind when I try to explain why...
Author's Response: You're saying this to the girl who gets teary eyed over road kill and Allstate commercials? Lol. >hugs< Thank you very much, and don't take this the wrong way but I hope you keep crying.
[Report This]Date: 09/07/2010 4:21:23 AM Title: Chapter 8
its 4 am, so excuse my poor review. All im gonna say is that your writing well deserves the 5 stars you recently got. And there's no need to be insecure about this chapter Its great as the rest, I felt as if I was right there inside that room, for moments it was overwhelming.
Thanks for updating this in time and you gotta know If I was rich I would pay you so you could quit your job and spend all your time in this story!
Author's Response: Good lord, doesn't anybody sleep around here? Don't make me slip something in your coffee. Thank you, I sooooooooo appreciate this. And as for the last part: it's the thought that counts. Not to the people at the bank/grocery store, but definately to me. :~)
[Report This]Date: 09/07/2010 2:10:53 AM Title: Chapter 8
“The Girl by RoseSumner, one of your favorite stories at The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive has been updated.” Oh how I love e-mails that begin with these simple words! Usually received around 5am once a week (if a certain person keeps to schedule!!) and I just have to dive right in – it’s a great wake up call, bleary eyes are suddenly clear as a bell and trying to read at lightning speed before reality sets in and I have to go to work for some of that ‘Stupid necessary income’.
Don’t know why you're disappointed with it, I wasn’t, and I’m the reader so what I say goes! Your description is wonderful especially in this chapter of Marie, so little is said yet we can see/feel every emotion she’s experiencing through action and reaction. Your Logan – well I’ve said it every week but hell once more wont kill anyone...Loving him.
I’m a pretty tough reader, can read the darkest / evil / saddest / cruel / bloodthirsty / all of the above, fics without blinking an eye. Your end line however “tucked her back in and listened to her beg him to stop something he hadn't begun.” There was the sound of my heart breaking but I’m going to deny it if anyone asks so keep it under your hat.
Love your A/N anything that makes me smile that early in the morning deserves a mention! I think your ‘rambling skills’ are contagious though so I better either go and lie down or get to work hmmmmmm choices, choices.
Thank you for the update look forward to the next one x
Author's Response: I sat here for about ten minutes--once this morning (because checking reviews is *my* great wake up call) and this afternoon, trying to put together an appropriate thank you for this piece of awesomeness. This is the only thing that comes semi-close..... >SCREAMING JUMPING LAUGHING FIST-PUMPING GOING WEEEEEEEE ALL THE WAY HOME< Oh--and thanks.
Date: 09/07/2010 1:48:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved this chapter! This story just keeps on getting better and better! Keep up the good work... and pwetty-please make the next chapter longer! =)
Author's Response: Wow. That pwetty-please thing really turned agaist me. Lol. The next chapter will definately be longer. Thanks, you are wonderful.
[Report This]Date: 09/06/2010 6:41:33 PM Title: Chapter 8
Only one complaint...as with all your chapters they are always too short!
Once again wonderfully written (and I have to thank you for actually taking the time to punctuate and check grammar. You are so gifted with expressing emotion and you literally create images in my mind with your writing.
Cannot wait for the next installment, I'm excited to see how the relationship grows between them.
Author's Response: My favorite complaint in the whole world. Thank you. >hugs< I wish I could buy you coffee...with too much cream and a scoop of icecream.
Date: 09/06/2010 6:04:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
Pwetty pwetty please quit everything else in life & just write fanfic! I find that I'm getting entirely too excited when I see an update. Like, practically foaming at the mouth excited. And then I rush through reading it & have to go back, re-read it & actually savor it because I know I won't get a hit...er..I mean *update* for another week!
Also, got the naked hugh box in the mail and sadly, as you predicted, it seems like he chewed through the box & escaped. Tranquilizers next time? Silver lining: a naked hugh running around town Origins style....oh if only I had a barn...
Author's Response: Oh shit...you played the pwetty please card...I'll call my boss and start filling out the forms for dropping out tomorrow. The law is the law. Im very grateful for the foam (>hands tissue<). It makes me feel better about taking fan fiction so seriously. Thank you a bajillion multiplied by twelve times....I used tranqs last time, they just dont work on that kind of raw sexage. And as for the barn comment: LOLSHILMSADMT (Laugh Out Loud So Hard I Lost My Sombrero And Dropped My Taco).
[Report This]Date: 09/06/2010 5:14:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
This story makes me wanna cry, but somehow I have this feeling that everything is going to be okay. :D
Author's Response: Oh, yeah. Im a sucker for happy endings. Thank you!!
Date: 09/06/2010 5:12:04 PM Title: Chapter 8
This chapter is so sad... I'm hoping for some light at the end of the tunnel or a little bloodshed soon... or both.
can't wait for more
Author's Response: One order of light and bloodshed coming right up. Would you like to upgrade that to the combo? It comes with a toy.
[Report This]Date: 09/05/2010 11:45:28 PM Title: Chapter 7
God this story just gets better and better. I hurt so bad for her and him. But I hope they can help each other out and find a happy ending at the end of all the strife and struggle.
Author's Response: This was a beautiful way to start my morning. Much better than coffee. Thank you!! (...And I've got about...two pages to go before I start typing up the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 09/01/2010 4:06:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
Okay... I had promised myself that I couldn't touch this story till it had been stamped with my favorite word. COMPLETE. And this is killing me...
But hey. I lasted three chapters without reading before I gave in. And what a treat it was. Falling into this world was wonderful. Very well done my dear. Absolutely brilliant. And that seems like an understatement.
Might I say, I don't come across many stories that deserve a 10/10?
Author's Response: Okay, so ummmm....Marry me? Lol. I can't even begin to describe how great this was to read. I bounced until I gave myself a headache. Thank you thank you thank you!
[Report This]Date: 08/31/2010 2:58:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
You left me shaking after reading this it was horrifing in a you made me feel like i was there wanting to take them where bad things don't happen. But the part that made me cry was Logan telling her 'it's okay' even after she fell asleep. To get another chapter i'd give up a naked Hugh Jackman.
Author's Response: It's aweful of me, but I'm bouncing of the walls with the idea that I could make anyone say that. Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!! >exclamation point to infinity<
Date: 08/31/2010 2:09:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
I was so excited when I received my alert for this amazing story. I couldn’t wait to get out the office, get home, and absorb myself. And I was not disappointed, it was worth the agonising wait. Although I was not quite prepared to have my heart broken. Again. How do you do that??!
“He didn't know, at first, who Logan was talking about, and that would cost him. He said, "She was good, man.", and that would cost him more.” – perfect ‘Wolverine-esk’ thoughts.
So, could I opt for the naked Hugh Jackman? Could you possibly send the real thing rather than a photo? If so, could you also assist with a suitable explanation to give my poor hubby?
:o)
Author's Response: Once they perfect human cloning, I say we nominate Hugh as the first subject. Everyone should have their own personal Logan. >lost in fantasy for several minutes< And a personal you, because your reviews are unbelievable. Thank you; you made my day...btw, its doesn't count as cheating with Mr. Jackman. Just offer him the same forgiveness if he ever finds himself in a room with Halle Berry.
Date: 08/31/2010 10:16:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Im terrible at reviewing but I have been reading this one since the beginning and I was getting awfully anxious for an update so Im glad you finally posted!
Well done chapter, you have a gift for conveying emotions and unspoken feelings.
Cant wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: But when you do review, you make me unspeakably happy. Thank you...Im kind of worried about how little free time I have, but I promise I'll do everything I can to get chapter eight completed in time.
Date: 08/31/2010 6:32:10 AM Title: Chapter 7
This was...Terrifying...but masterfully written, as usual. Scuse my poor spelling. More.
Author's Response: I don't care about spelling, its the beautiful sentiments that count. Thank you!
Date: 08/31/2010 5:58:38 AM Title: Chapter 7
A picture of naked Hugh Jackman?
I'll take that one ;)
... or just the next chapter.
Author's Response: How 'bout both? :-D
[Report This]Date: 08/31/2010 5:35:43 AM Title: Chapter 7
I must have been holding my breath through most of this chapter because when I finished reading I let it all out in a rush. That was a seriously awesome chapter - such a terrible thing has been done to Marie and yet you handled the situation with such tenderness. You have never written Logan better than in this chapter - honestly you should be proud of yourself.
And yes, I'll take the offer of the naked Hugh Jackman! Forget the puppy and candy though - I've got cats and a too-fat husband!!
Author's Response: >wild screaming & jumping up and down< Thank you. This was wonderful to hear. Your Hugh is on his way.
[Report This]Date: 08/31/2010 2:12:01 AM Title: Chapter 7
Now then, my mind wandered whilst reading - if her skin was going to manifest because of pain/horror/self preservation I would have thought that it would have come to life with a vengeance during the attack and not begun weakly after – were the ‘no’s’ and the ‘I don’t want’s’ her way of warning him what could happen or just her panicked and scared over what he could do to her? I think I’m on the side of wanting her to be able to control it, but if she can why didn’t she? You know the worst part?.........................I have to wait to find out!
Great chappie as usual and at the risk of repeating myself.......Logan’s emotion battle has me so hooked to this story, bless him he really hasn’t got a clue how far he’s fallen. Trying to do the right thing, *wanting* to do the right thing, not having a clue what was the right thing (when it came to Marie) and then we have vengeance/justice and Logan’s back at home with himself and knowing exactly what to do and what is ‘right’. Btw loved the ending of this one, took us back to the beginning and tied the whole chapter together.
Keep it coming, you have us all pulling our hair out wanting to know what’s going to happen.
Author's Response: I wish I could answer you without giving anything away. I can only promise that everything in this chapter was intentional. :~) Thank you for being so thoughtful! >hugs<
Date: 08/31/2010 1:03:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
It's frustrating when reading this story simply because of the thought 'I have to wait another week for another awesome chapter?! WTF?!' And sure, send me a naked Hugh Jackman... I don't need the candy... but naked Hugh and a puppy... cute and hot all rolled into one! YUM!
Author's Response: Im very glad you think so, and your personal Hugh is in the mail. Muchas Gracias.