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Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2011 11:29:07 AM Title: Chapter 18

Awww happy birthday Marie :)

Reviewer: doctorg Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2011 1:23:24 AM Title: Chapter 18

This one:
Her eyes blurred and stung, a reflex to any surprise.

Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2010 9:00:06 AM Title: Chapter 18

I really enjoyd this chapter. It's nice to see them taking he next few steps in their relationship. Although the realization tha she's only 16 was a little it of a let down. *le sigh* But I"m excited for more. My favorite part as the bookstore. The most awkard part was the period. LOL

Author's Response: Thank you!!!! This made for a great birthday present. And don't worry, I'll get her to legal as fast as I can. ;~)

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2010 10:26:10 AM Title: Chapter 18

Brilliant. Again. With your penchant for unflinching honesty, you actually went there and used the regularity of her cycle to show us that she's getting healthier as well as to torture Logan with the knowledge that she is, physically at least, no longer a child. And what better occasion to use to indicate the passing of time than her sixteenth birthday? Love Logan's gift, by the way. And his inability to leave her -- for ANY reason -- makes him probably my most favoritest Logan of all time. He will most definitely be my favorite for all eternity if when the time comes he lets her know somehow that she is more than worth the very, very, very looooooong wait. --Wendie

Author's Response: Didn't think today could get any better (had my birthday party) but coming home to this made it absolutely, 100%, over the moon perfect. Thank you so very much!! (Very, very, very is right. This beast is five months in the making, can you believe that?)

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2010 10:25:41 AM Title: Chapter 18

I saw no typos, and the tension rising in Logan was beautifully expressed, well done! More please!

Author's Response: Really? That's a relief. Thank you, and Merry Christmas!!

Reviewer: annie77 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2010 10:30:41 AM Title: Chapter 18

Yesss this chapter is finally here and If I could express myself well (something my writing skills wont let me) I would tell you how great it is with details included like some other reviewers do. You're taking this story to a perfect path and I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter and the closure of this all. Oh and I LOVE chapters with lots of scenes!! I hope you make a super long last chapter and an epilogue as well :D

Marry Christmas to you too and I'm sure Santa will give you nice things you've been real good this year writing one of the most awesome rogan fics ever!

Author's Response: Oh, lord. I'm sorry, thought I'd already replied to this. I know I certainly danced over it. A thousand thank yous for this. You've been a great friend this year; you're guaranteed whatever is on that list of yours.

Reviewer: litlen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2010 1:12:33 AM Title: Chapter 18

:) (dont know how to do a massive happy smiley face doing a happy dance but that is what i wanted to do!)

wonderful as usual. Full marks especially for the non kiss and her ease with it.

Merry Christmas, have a good one x

Author's Response: Is this the happy dance your thinking of?.... *<}:~D->O< or this....<(..<)(>..)>^(. .)^ or this...\\:D/? (Got curious, did some googling.) Thank you--short or long, your reviews are awesome.

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2010 11:24:38 PM Title: Chapter 18

I'd ask Santa, but he's been ignoring me since I started sending him all those lists begging for Hugh Jackman.

That fat bastard has been ignoring me for the same reason. I mean really, it's not like I wouldn't share or anything. Eventually. For bragging purposes. You understand, I'm sure.

~Mia

Author's Response: I'm sure we could figure out some kind of joint-custody thing. I mean, a girl's gotta sleep, right?

Reviewer: Tasa Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2010 9:46:48 PM Title: Chapter 18

I'm curious about this skin scrub. Is there much to putting it together, or just a matter of mixing until the consistency is right? :)

Also, you don't have to ask, I'll always review. :D I've been checking back every day (sometimes a few times a day) even though I'm so busy studying! Thank you for making my last study night happier. *glomp* :D
Merry Christmas (or, Happy Holidays if you prefer) and thank you for the chapter! I'm super curious how it will end.

Author's Response: Oh, no. It's the simplest thing in the world. Just get a cup of sugar, add half as much vegetable oil as your sugar and stir until it has a nice consistency,and add whatever other ingredients are available. You're skin has never felt so smooth--its terrific. :~D And so is this review; its what I'll be reading any time the writer's block hits. Thank you!!!!!!

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2010 6:54:08 PM Title: Chapter 18

:D

That up there is my first reaction. I barely got through the rest of your email & was practically salivating once you mentioned Oh, chapter 18 is up.

This sounds weird, but since we're all in the same WRFA boat I'm just gonna say it: I loved the sniffing scene. I'd take a well-described sniff than a poorly written kiss in Rogan fics.

I tink you executed the whole age explanation very very well. It fit in seamlessly - all your agonizing paid off (sorry if my confusion about the passage of time played a part :/ )

Just one chapter left?!?! *pouts*
I'm super excited to see how you're planning on ending this & just what ol' Buckethead has to do with things.

Author's Response: >falls on knees< OhmyGODD *Thank* you. Oh, thankyouthankyouthankyou!!!! Been going crazy over that age thing, absolutely bonkers....This review, like all your others, is packed with pure Sahara awesome goodness. Thank you. >hugs<

Reviewer: WitchBaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2010 5:47:34 PM Title: Chapter 18

wow, the story just keeps getting better and better. your writing just pulls the reader straight into the story, really connects with the characters. i adore how you write logan too, especially the glimpses into his thoughts and feelings for rogue. he's so wonderful with her, too.

i'm curious how rogue feels about logan now, if she's slowly starting to develop romantic feelings for him or if it's still too soon for her. i'm hoping she does and doesn't fall for bobby or someone else, i think that might break logan's heart. anyway, once more, AMAZING update. please write more soon so i can feed my fix! ;-)

Author's Response: Thank you--reviews like yours are *my* fix. Way better than chocolate. I think, or hope--if I get it right-- you're questions will be answered in the next chapter. You're awesome, as always. Merry Christmas!

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2010 5:33:01 PM Title: Chapter 18

And Merry Christmas to you!! And please, please, stop making those little braking marks on my heart. This story is beautiful. And for my Christmas present, I want a happy ending.

Author's Response: Hmmm....Think I could do that, but it probably won't get to you in time for Christmas--do you know how hard happy endings are to ship? But I'll try, especially after a sweet review like this one. ;~D

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