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Date: 01/04/2011 1:17:40 AM Title: Chapter 16
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His arms reached out and in some delicate maneuver of body parts among boxes and bottles that the returned darkness prevented her from seeing, the girl's tearful face was pressed against Logan's stomach.
And I love the crazy little detail that he doesn't have his belt on, like he threw clothes on in a hurry to get to her. Whether that's what you intended or not.
Author's Response: You're right about what I intended, with that gift of insight and kindness you possess.
[Report This]Date: 12/01/2010 11:47:58 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh my god you can't leave it at this! This is tortureeeeee.
I haven't been lurking, I promise. I let a few chapters build up so I could get a good dose of Rogan-y goodness. Mmmm. Can't wait for more. :D
Also, either I'm blind, or that image link didn't work again. :
Author's Response: Don't worry, I think (hope) everybody will be satisfied by the time this ends. And judging from the surprising length of certain scenes, its now looking like two or three chapters. :-) Thank you uber much; I'm happy that you like it....and you're not blind, I just can't get the link right. :-(
Date: 11/29/2010 3:27:26 AM Title: Chapter 16
Ooooooooohhhhh *squee*
Author's Response: Lol. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2010 11:50:23 PM Title: Chapter 16
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me that the reason nothing was happening is because Logan is the only person she trusts!
Author's Response: Uh-uh. Nope. Not telin'. You'll never get it out of me. Never!
Date: 11/24/2010 2:41:04 PM Title: Chapter 16
amazing!!!! so cannot wait to see rogue and logan's relationship develop further, from guardian to friend to eventually more!
Author's Response: Thank you!! You'll be seeing a whole lot of that in the next chapter. ;~)
Date: 11/23/2010 3:10:58 PM Title: Chapter 16
I can't tell you how psyched I was to see that you posted two chapters. I really love how Logan is so sweet and protective. The closet scene was just awesome!
Now about your comment about how you're going to wrap up this story in one or two chapters, I don't think anyone's going to disagree with you if you decide to write MORE than 1-2 chapters. Hell, I'd be happy if you wrote another 10-50 chapters! Like another reviewer said, don't rush it, I don't want to miss anything either.
Author's Response: I'm very glad you liked it. Though, if it weren't for the computer glitch it would have been only one (albeit long) chapter. It was great that it could be split so smoothly. Thanks a bajillion!
Date: 11/22/2010 10:30:05 PM Title: Chapter 16
Okay I totally didn't catch the significance of the "It's my turn" thing until I read Moviemom's & then litlen's reviews. Oh man, just.....oh man. Wow. You snuck that right in there. And it works so well and just....I'm not really thinking this review out. I'm pretty much at the "OH MY GOD OH MY GOD HOW DID I MISS THIS>?!?!!?!>>@!#@**#*U#*T#HB#T*!!!!!"
I feel like us readers are on the most epic, Rogan-filled scavenger hunt.
I'm bouncing.
Author's Response: >screams a little, hugs< Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou! I love you!
Date: 11/22/2010 10:09:53 PM Title: Chapter 16
OK, I really feel like an idiot here. Thanks bunches to Litlen for pointing out your total awesomeness with 'It's my turn.' As soon as I read those words in her review I immediately understood the significance that I missed when actually reading the chapter. (I'm going to plead 'distraction' on this one -- My son and his friends have turned my house into a war zone, complete with Nerf guns and camo gear as I read this. And my daughter insists on interrupting me every other paragraph...What's a mom have to do to get some reading done around here?) Anyway, those words hit me like a brick. I actually gasped, "Oh, my God!" and didn't care who heard me. (I don't think anyone did, but still...)
Talk about your post traumatic stress disorder! A typical teen argument, delivered in all innocence, is like a bomb going off in her gut. No different than a war veteran flipping out over the 'pop' of a burned out light bulb or the 'bang' of a car backfiring. And you just slipped it in there...called no special attention to it...just told the story with your usual -- but brilliant -- awesome honesty. --Wendie
P.S. That extra pair of hands you see helping you and litlen shove B, J and J off the cliff? Those are mine...
Author's Response: Thank you very, very, very much. Its amazing how well you see everything the writers here are trying so hard to say. Its incredible. Have a great Thanksgiving! And as for the kids-thing, one word: Nyquil. ;~D
Date: 11/22/2010 9:39:34 PM Title: Chapter 16
YIPPEEEEEEEEEEE! Don't know what caused her meltdown. Don't really care. SOOOOO happy that he's immune to her skin! And I am positively over the moon that he's got some kind of 'Marie radar' going on.
I also dig how you sneaked in that little parenthetical reference to how she's more aware of 'the expectations of normal society' than she realizes. If she can harness that, she might begin to feel more like she 'fits in' than she does now. Not that Logan gives a rat's ass about her fitting in -- not unless it's important to her. It will be interesting to see if she takes her cues from him on that score, or if he takes his cues from her.
Congrats on setting the bar for reviews higher and higher with each amazing chapter. --Wendie
Author's Response: >hugs< *lightbulb* Thank you for this, for everything, and for the scene you just inspired.
Date: 11/22/2010 9:18:53 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh frabjuous day! Many thanks for the two awesome chapters.
~Mia
Author's Response: Have now adopted frabjuous. Gracias!
Date: 11/22/2010 8:51:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
I know you said there'd be tweaking with Jubes, but day-um....chica's a bitch!
"He always smiles so eagerly at her." You're dead on with this line. I hate the kid, but I like the description.
Oh, by the way. WTF?!?! What happened at the end?! He can touch her!!! You are so lucky I haven't figured out how to crawl through my computer screen, missy
Author's Response: Yeah, umm...I'm (Courtney) having a lot of fun with Jubilee. Never read the comics, but I hope I'm not totally insulting the canon-devotees. Thank you so much!
Date: 11/22/2010 6:43:25 PM Title: Chapter 16
We missed ya! Great chapter as always!
Author's Response: Aaaww. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 11/22/2010 6:26:38 PM Title: Chapter 16
I confess (though its obvious) Im a sucker for all the Logan/the girl parts that you write so wonderfully due to your unique talent so for me the "closet" part was breathtaking, I had to read it twise!
Now something has been on my mind since you said there are only 1 or 2 chapters left, and its that we haven't get any rogan action, I mean just a few hints that I loved of course, But well, I wish there was more of it since the story is coming to an end. You know like more interaction between them and descriptions of it. You know I never make request but this is something I had in my mind and felt like sharing with you before the story is complete.
Oh and if you would want to make this story 50 chapters long I wouldn't have any problem :)
Author's Response: Ohmigod, AAAAAH!!! Thank you. I wish I could hug you right now, for real. As for your request (the first one; the 50 chapters thing is a little tough)....I don't want to spoil it, but, well, I don't think you'll be disappointed.
Date: 11/22/2010 6:18:59 PM Title: Chapter 16
Three little words... harmless enough... maybe the panic attack helps a little, if Marie can let something out... I love your Logan!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm having fun with this Logan too.
[Report This]Date: 11/22/2010 6:00:33 PM Title: Chapter 16
‘It’s my turn’ 3 little words that actually made me shudder. Great line to drag you back into the story as a whole.
I’m repeating myself I know but you really do suck the reader right in with your words – we see it and feel it, such wonderful descriptive writing through panic and comfort and ending with what I am going to assume is control through safety at the end. This is the line that stuck with me......“Smashed there against soft folds of cloth and muscles that lacked any give. It was not uncomfortable.”
One of my fav chapters well done x
A few requests....please push bobby off a cliff - I know he hasn’t really done anything but he pisses me off on a good day so just a thought! While you’re at it let him take Jean with him....and I’m not liking Jubes much either infact....how many’s too many?.....you line ‘em up and I’ll push!
Author's Response: >scribbling on To-Do list<...Find...cliff...and...alibi....Jean, Jubes...Bobby too? Here I thought I was making him nice in this. Oh, well. You the boss. Especially after this review, after recognizing the one line I worried was too subtle. Would you like a trophy or the box of chocolates?
Date: 11/22/2010 4:56:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
OK. I don't have the words anymore. And I hate repeating myself. I'll just say this : more, please.
Author's Response: Thank you. And yes, ma'am, comin' right up.