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Next morning. I was supposed to work but I jumped straigh back to this story instead. Screw work. I'll do it this weekend. This fic is too good to pass up and I'm sure I won't be able to concentrate knowing there's such an awesome fic out there just waiting to be read.
Poor Marie. I wanna hug her. I wanna hug Logan, too. They're all so lonely, although Logan would never admit that.
Oh goodness, this chapter breaks my heart every time. This line has stuck with me:
Logan could see the tag sticking out at him like an impudent tongue, it's brand too faded to read.
Author's Response: Is it sick to say I'm *glad* it broke your heart?
Oh and yes, I love a drowning Jean. It gives me warm fuzzies.
My Marie and Rogue Muses find her drowning bittersweet.
On one hand it makes them happy that it means she's free to go after Logan but they don't like that he still gets upset over her loss.
Linda
Author's Response: Gotta say, I'm very jealous of your multiple personalities/muses/thingies. So much better than mine.
Lemme at those soon to be dead motherf*ckers so I can kill em.
Nobody hurts my Marie and lives.
I'd give you one of my kidneys but mine don't work so well.
I read this chapter and I wanna just hug em both.
Oh and I love Logan's food agression issues. Makes me want to go through my vet assistant training notes for plot bunnies.
Linda and My Wolvie Muse.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you sooooooo much. Got a big grin at this.
...hold the door open for his payment of innocence.
Another breathtaking description. And what's truly remarkable is that I don't begrudge him one second of his payment, because, despite what he believes about himself, his intentions are almost ridiculously honorable.
And then what a difference a day makes...Now, I'm REALLY looking forward to that Apocalyptic comeuppance that somebody so richly deserves...Six down, four to go... --Wendie
Author's Response: Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!
:-O xXx
Author's Response: :~D :~D :~D
i hate u with ur cliffhangers. nice chapter ending........but grrrrrrrr. cant wait for next chapter
Author's Response: Lol!!! Gee, thanks. :D
Brilliantly done chapter..love how Logan thinks he’s fighting “it” every step of the way, is perfectly happy with his justifications while doing so, but he’s already deeply involved. As for the end..you can’t keep doing this to me..to quote Eric Northman (TrueBlood/SVM) “you’re killing me.” Now, I expect (all right, hope-pretty, pretty please :)) tons and tons of Rogan goodness including caring, tenderness, love, friendship, safety, romance, and when it’s the right time, physical affection and intimacy between these two..I can’t think of a Rogue who needs it more. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: There's nothing in the dictionary (I looked) to say how grateful I am. Thanks. You're very kind and I wish I could hug you.
yay! plot! :)
I guess it was incest?
Good turn the story's taken, even tho it's a horrible thing for Marie. Now Logan will have to face his protective instincts head-on.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Wow. I think that gave more depth to the story. I am borderline obsessed with the amount of great detail you put into this. It's amazing. When I read each chapter, I can literally play it out before my eyes. I can't wait to see what Logan's reaction is.
ps. (I'm glad that I'm not the only one who gets a big case of the grins at the thought of Jean's lungs being violated with lots and lots of H20. :DDDDD )
Author's Response: I read your review this morning, and all throughout my workday (while I scrubbed toilets, made beds, and inhaled way too many cleaning chemicals) I've had a huge smile on my face. Thank you for putting it there.
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
Great chapter: reluctantly good Logan at the rescue!!!
Author's Response: Hahahahahaha!!!! I'll do my best, but (barring a magical burst of inspiration, which is semi-possible, considering all of these incredible reviews) most likely it will take a week. Sorry, and thank you to infinity.
I have to agree with Wanderlust's description of what updates for this story are like. Except I'm gonna go ahead & say that it's more like crack. Now I've never dabbled in illegal substances, but I'm thinking this is the classic 'withdrawing-in-between-hits' scenario. So my shaking, twitching, & general mood inconsistencies come Wednesday afternoon can be on your conscience now.
For what it's worth this is my fave chapter though (so maybe withdrawal will take a little longer to settle in?). I find that I have to step away from your story after an update so I can really think about the review I want to give & hope that it conveys just how much I love this.
"If she wanted to eat, she was going to sit her ass inside and talk to him. Like he was normal. Like he was capable of doing a good thing. Like he was someone anybody would thank, for a service other than sex or violence." Oh I loved this! I really, really loved this! It says it all & perfectly captures your Logan & their odd little arrangement here. This is why your Logan is my all time favorite :D
The last part was terribly heartbreaking. As in I genuinely, physically ached while reading it. I cannot wait until your next update (seriously, did I mention the withdrawal symptoms?). Do you *really* need a job anyway? Friends? Family? A life? Psssssh.
Author's Response: Have you ever seen a squirming kitten, or a baby's little hands, that were so cute you just wanted to bite it? Its very strange, but thats kinda what I feel reading your review. But on a much larger level. I want to MAUL you with hugs. I am so grateful for this. How weird is that? 'Cuz Im willing to deny having said it. Btw: my reply to Wanderlust applies to you too; it would have been cheap to use it twice.
Um, this story is amazing! More please!
Author's Response: Muchos Gracias. >hugs & squeezes<
wow. The detail again is fabulous, and the pacing is great. BUT YOU KEEP LEAVING ME IN SUSPENSE! GAAAAAH! :) Though i hate waiting for the next chapter, its keeping me on pins and needles waiting for the next one! Good job!
Author's Response: Salamat Po (Tagalog for Thank You). >wild hugging, spins you around< Im delighted that you think so.
Sigh. You know what reading your updates is like? It's like going to an amazing restaurant, ordering your meal, waiting waiting waiting for it to come... and then gobbling it all up in just a few minutes. And being even more hungry when you finish!
This is all to say, you are a very effective writer and a champion storyteller. And if you don't keep updating, I just may starve.
Author's Response: Okay, so if you weren't a girl (Im assuming you are, forgive me if otherwise), and if I were a bit sluttier, and if you had said this to me in person rather than online, I would be forced to kiss you. Not a visiting-grandma kiss, but a ride-'em-cowgirl-can't-do-this-in-public kind. In other, less uncomfortable terms: Thank you. Im glad you think so.
That is so sad! I hope Logan guts whomever did that to her!
Author's Response: Me too. ;~) Supermambothankyou.
I just read this whole thing (at work of course) and I am loving it! Hate the cliffy!!!! I can't wait for the next installment!!! Thank you!
Author's Response: What else would you do at work? Ha. A thousand thanks.
DDDDD: Awwww! No, poor Rogue. DDDD: I'm dying for the next chapter now! Can't wait for an update.
Author's Response: Gracias, that really means a lot to me. I will try to get chapter seven written as soon as possible.
I'm starting to think thenext chapter will have me needing tissues but i need to know what happens next and how Logan will fix it. Cause he can fix evey thing after all hes a super hero right?
Author's Response: Right. But have those tissues ready, just in case. I cant thank you enough. >hugs<
Oh no! No no no! Poor Marie... I am so glad that Logan is there for her right now. Please update soon!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thats very sweet, thanks. Next update: a week, Im afraid.
Waaaah!!!! Cliffhanger!!!! I want to know what he did to that bastard that calls himself "Marie's father". I want to know how he saved her (because he DID). I want to know how did he find out that she is a mutant. And I want to know NOW!!
p.s: I also want Jean to suffer. Not that you are obligated to even include her in this story. I just want her to suffer on general basis.
Author's Response: >wags finger< You cant always get what you want, Anami. Lol. But I'll do my best. (As for her mutation--my lips are sealed for awhile, but I promise that I haven't forgotten about it. Thank you. I truly appreciate this.
Best chapter yet, (although they are all brilliant!). I just love how you build up their interaction and relationship so slowly and carefully, ever so thoughtfully.
“If she wanted to eat, she was going to sit her ass inside and talk to him. Like he was normal. Like he was capable of doing a good thing.” – oh, what an amazing insight into Logan’s mind.
And as for the end, once again you manage to break my heart. Poor, poor little Rogue. I wish I could give her a hug and tell her Logan will take care of her! (And that’s when I have to remind myself they are not real people – lol!)
I look forward to the next update, as ever...
Author's Response: Thanks-a-mundo (Uh-huh, thats right, I said thanks-a-mundo) for the beautiful sentiments. >hugs< Im so glad you think so.
Oh gods. You better update soon!
Author's Response: Or whatchoo gonna do? Huh? Huh? >raises eyebrow< Lol. Thanks.
Oh my I can't wait for more but I'm afraid of what happened...
Author's Response: Lol. Major thankies.
Am loving the questioning and excuses for why he’s doing what he’s doing/for each step he takes/ for his concern. Your Logan – inside and out, really is a pleasure to read.
‘She told him her name, Marie. As if he gave a shit. As if he'd asked, or been the least bit curious. As if she were anyone important enough for him to think of by name’....... Yep - ‘as if’
Loving both story and style, having said that you really do have to stop doing this to me, you’re evil! In a really nice, clever but twisted way!! Talk about knowing when to stop or not as is the case for us readers! I actually swore at you (will appologise only when next chappie is up) it’s all your fault anyway, if it wasn’t for you I’d have patiently waited till you’d finished it but oh no you had to get me chapter reading didn’t you.....well I hope your pleased with yourself!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Actually, I am pretty pleased....how much of a bitch does that make me? Im basking in the glow of being able to make anyone say that. A simple thank you is not enough, you are the best!