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VERY well written and nicely done too! SO powerful, so sad. I'm not very knowledgable about this particular universe, but it still came across exceedingly well, even to a novice. Looking forward to seeing more from you!
Hey, I think you did an excellent job with this story. It's very sad and moving, and I thought it flowed nicely. I didn't have trouble following it at all. I liked Wolverine and the XMen and I think there are a lot of potential plots that can come out of that show. I hope you keep writing fics... possibly in that universe since you're good at it.
One part of the fic stood out to me though and made me wonder what was going on... when the sentinel sees Logan, it's order is not to engage... did that happen in the show? or are you setting up for a future story? Either way I found it very interesting.
Great work! I enjoyed reading it very much.
Author's Response: Hi Dita! Thanks for your review! The reason I had the sentinel not engage/destroy Logan was that I needed him to survive, since in the series future Wolverine meets Xavier. Xavier tells Wolverine "The new team is good" (or something along those lines) and Logan replies "Yeah, but I miss the old team". rnSo yeah, I needed Logan to be alive in order to (possibly :3) work more into it later... I'm already tossing some ideas around. Thanks again for reading!rn~Anji
thanks for the great story. i love Wolverine and the X-men and wish there were more stories based on that amazing show.
as for this story, well what did logan think would happen if he left for 10 years? that she would survive this wretched war? he's lucky he got to see her one last time...but it will ahunt him forever b/c of his own selfishness.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for your comment! I'm flattered that you read my work, being as I love all your writing! Yeah, I love Wolverine and the X-Men and I'm so sad it got canceled T.T. I figured that in this show, there really is no way for a happy future. I got my idea from the vision of the future where Xavier sees all the gravestones-- so I started thinking how everyone died... :3rnThanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it!
I like the concept, but I kept getting confused a lot. I think it was due to a vague transition from present to past as well as a somewhat jumbled action scene. I just found it very hard to get through. Maybe you should consider a beta reader. That might help with some of the coherency issues.
Author's Response: Thanks for the input, I actually had it read twice before uploading it, but I guess my reader must have missed it. I tried to make the past in italics.. but I wonder if they didn't show up in the updated file. Thanks for reading and thanks for your input!
way to make me cry like a baby here! that was just so sad!!!! wow... Very well written but so dang sad!
Author's Response: I know! I'm so sorry I had to make it sad, but it was the only way! Thanks so much for reading and I'm glad you liked it even though it made you cry!rn~Anji