Interestingly non-romantic, but still sweet. It worked for me, though I admit I probably would have fleshed out the second half a bit more.

The last scene certainly left me hopeful of some romance in their unwritten future :-)

Author's Response: I was just happy to get it finished, to be quite honest. That thing had literally sat on my computer in six parts for...a long time. A very long time. Plus I didn't want to rush them. Maybe, given my penchant for sequels and series, I'll do more in this 'verse some time.