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Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2010 10:36:02 PM Title: Chapter 8

Gods above and below girl you rock! More soon please this is great!

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2010 10:25:33 PM Title: Chapter 6

Your angsty drama has perfect timing for my incredibly shitty mood. Much appreciated. Not gonna lie, Logan & Jean sex makes me want to toss my cookies, but I'm just pissed enough to appreciate the drama. (And I'm liking the spoiling I'm getting by seeing more than one chapter updated :)

Reviewer: NYLVGRL85 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2010 10:17:18 PM Title: Chapter 8

First THANK YOU for the update! Lol secondly GREAT JOB! Cannot wait for the rest please oh please update soon. Go Rogue! I love how she showed both Logan and jean mainly Logan she is not to mess with!

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2010 10:15:13 PM Title: Chapter 8

Oh my heavenly Jesus. That chapter was fucking amazing. I really wish that I had your writing talent. Or at least I could be like Rogue and 'borrow' it for a while. That ending... the way he is being Haunted. And how he is disgusted with himself and with Jean.. is perfect. That is exactly how they should feel. And the thing that got me was that she refused to raise just one eyebrow. That is the sickest burn I have ever read happen in a character's mind. Bravo my dear!

Reviewer: Shuttlelauncher Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2010 10:10:34 PM Title: Chapter 8

I love this story!

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2010 10:01:27 PM Title: Chapter 7

WOW. I WAS SO DAMN CLOSE. I hope She gets in danger and Scott screams her name out loud and Logan goes Berserk.

Reviewer: Princesakarlita411 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2010 9:47:09 PM Title: Chapter 8

wow
i dont feel bad for logan or jean

Reviewer: Princesakarlita411 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2010 6:04:16 PM Title: Chapter 7

wow

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2010 4:11:08 PM Title: Chapter 6

OMFG! The way you described how poor Rogue found them...well...I was peeping through my fingers as I read. This is exceptionally good writing to have that effect! I love it and can't wait for more... :-)

Author's Response: Hell, it was painful to write! I think I was almost doing the same thing, peeking through my fingers and trying not to blanch at the thought of what I was writing! Grrrr...!

Reviewer: Desiree84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2010 1:01:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

Now I definitely see why Scott and Rogue came together, and they fit very well. I would love for Logan to get a hint of what is going on between Scott and Rogue. This is excellent!

Author's Response: That was the thing that killed me when I wrote that first chapter oh so many years ago...literally, it was like eight or nine. I knew it was *good*. I didn't *want* it to be. I didn't want them to be! I think I may have gotten over my Scott/Rogue issues now, though, because it is becoming slightly less painful to write. Slightly. A little.

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2010 11:38:03 AM Title: Chapter 6

I love the curse she screamed at them:

"You and that whore on the ground had better not die any time soon, because Heaven won't have you, and Hell decided it's too good for the likes of you!”

I have got to remember that. I know people it's appropriate for. You are amazing!

Author's Response: I've got another line coming up in Chapter 8 that you might like. Stay tuned!

Reviewer: natsuki sochi Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2010 10:40:29 AM Title: Chapter 6

i hope Rogue never be with logan coz she would just be like jean abandoning Scott for logan but she would forgive, AND forget him as been anything more than a friend. dont get me wrong i love rogue and logan together it just that based on this fic's plot, logan would have to be taught the value others feelings, relationship and the consequence of destroying it bcoz i know if somebody did the same to him he would have beaten or even killed them. it just vexes me that he expects people to not do shit to him and then he turns right around and does the same shit (hypocrite). let him feel the pain scott feels;he and jean would not last 5 months together thats if they are still together and let scott and rougue grow stronger and comfortable with each other. i know for one Scott is not likely to forgive jean so easly. this fic is interesting pls kip it up.

Reviewer: ellebell Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2010 6:13:43 AM Title: Chapter 6

Love love love this so far.

You write beautifully, can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2010 2:34:48 AM Title: Chapter 6

Wow. I knew they had done something hurtful to the both of them, but to have them both witness them in the act, and the aftermath would be enough to make anyone either lash out or have a breakdown. Logan and Jean deserve each other. And I'm very happy that Marie and Scott have a chance to ease their pain in the arms of each other. :)

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2010 2:28:17 AM Title: Chapter 6

Ok. Now it's time for suffering time!!! And humiliating time. Do go on.

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2010 10:52:37 PM Title: Chapter 5

Awe buttfuck. Okay, so The situation involves some sort of higher organization that has trapped either both Logan and Jean or just one of them for mutant testing, just when scott and rogue begin to heal mentally. After saving them, They realize that they still love logan and jean, but they love each other too. and *BAM* Marie is pregnant with Scott's baby.

Author's Response: Wow. I think you may have an even more active imagination than I do! No, this situation--okay, I could go into it, but then I'd be giving something away, and I don't want to do that. Just rest assured that it's not that...hmmm...drastic? I like prolonged torture. Very prolonged torture. At least for certain characters who can't get their heads out of their asses.

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2010 10:30:22 PM Title: Chapter 3

You think you're sick?? I have always hated Scott with a passion and I find myself in need of more chapters of them like this... God I'm Demented.

Author's Response: LOL I love that. I really do. It makes me feel so proud of me right now!

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2010 10:18:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

OOHOOHOOH!!!!!!! Im excited to see where this goes!

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2010 10:01:50 PM Title: Chapter 5

Situation: Jean and Logan need rescuing? I like this story. Rogue and Scott fit well together. I could live with this one being a Scott and Rogue story

Author's Response: LALALALA I'm not saying! :-) I'm glad you think they fit well together. It means I'm doing my job despite the obvious leanings of this forum! (Which I will get back to...eventually...probably...because I'm a sucker for L/R.)

Reviewer: Princesakarlita411 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2010 5:53:41 PM Title: Chapter 5

situation?

Author's Response: Oh, yeah. It'll knock their socks off. Trust me. (And soooo not in a good way!) But first, another flashback.

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2010 5:51:29 PM Title: Chapter 5

I don't have to guess. I KNOW. Please do hurry up.

Author's Response: Do you? ;-) We'll see. I have things up my sleeve. I think I'm in the torturing mood again. I guess that's what happens when I finish a UST story...

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2010 3:44:33 PM Title: Chapter 5

“I'm just asking you to keep a shirt on, Logan." - no, no, no! lol! :-)

By the way, I hope you realised that my last review was meant as a harmless and amusing comment? I am a firm believer in 'each to their own' and if this story really made me sick, I wouldn't read it. I think your writing is excellent. x

Author's Response: LOL Yeah, I got that. It's just that, it really did make me feel a little nauseous! Then again, so is what I'm about to do next. ;-)

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2010 11:33:19 AM Title: Chapter 4

And this is When Logan screws up big time isn't it? I love this story. More please? Soon?!

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2010 8:04:41 AM Title: Chapter 3

Not sick. Its a good story. Good stories need to be written. I like it. Keep going.

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2010 1:58:54 PM Title: Chapter 3

Definately sick. I had to pretend it was Logan in the shower with her, it's the only way I could read it! lol! :-)

Author's Response: Yeah, when I wrote it everything was "he" with no name. I had to go back and change one or two to "Scott" when I was done writing it, and even that made me wince.

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