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Reviewer: JadeFeonix Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2011 12:14:23 AM Title: Baby Come on Over

D: no...thats sad. But the Mutant seems like a good guy...i just hope he doesn't break her heart

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2010 2:49:27 AM Title: Baby Come on Over

" Damn that girl, anyway! Why had she chosen to go out and do that?"

uh, b/c some sexy feral mutant couldn't gather up the testicular fortitude to barge into her room and claim her LOL!

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2010 6:31:39 PM Title: Baby Come on Over

She had sex with a guy that wasn't Logan????? Aaaaaargh!!!! Damn his slow brain!!!

Author's Response: I love how everyone's blaming Logan. If only he'd reacted here the way he did in my other story...see what happens when the characters get minds of their own? ;-)

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2010 1:40:08 PM Title: Baby Come on Over

Truthfully, I'm disappointed. You gave us all this 'torture' for Logan, all this teasing build-up and then you bailed. I'm all for keeping the story moving, and God knows, I hate the fact the she basically had sex with him precisely because of who he WASN'T, not because of who he WAS or because he really meant anything to her, but I was kind of looking forward to how she perceived her first sexual encounter. Was she thrilled? Disappointed? Scared? Was she even a little bit sorry it wasn't with Logan? Not only did they not have sex 'on camera', as it were, but she didn't even dish about it with her girlfriends afterward. And wouldn't it have been great for her to really have something to compare Logan with eventually? Might that not make Logan just a tad nervous...talk about your torture...

Anyway, all of that having been said, I am still very much on board with this story and look forward to 'the campaign'. --Wendie

Author's Response: All right, I'm determined to make it up to you. I'll see what I can do in the next couple of chapters, okay?

Reviewer: Princesakarlita411 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2010 7:47:44 PM Title: Baby Come on Over

awesome
when will logan wake up
brayan seems nice
so happy u updated so fast

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2010 5:32:31 PM Title: Baby Come on Over

she had sex

And it's alone Logan's fault that it wasn't with him *growls and smacks Logan on the back of his head*

Author's Response: Yep! Stupid Logan. Get a clue, boy, and get moving--oh, wait, that's my job, right? To make sure he does? ;-)

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